Fallen angel by susale

Fallen angel

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After the jump the little angel found herself on the grown leaking. You see angels they don´t bleed, they leak –they leak out of their divinity. And the more she leaked, the more she got colors on her cheeks. The pavement under her turned all white and by the time she finally stood up the last bit of her divine divinity fell behind as dust. No more wings, she was just like any other human now. She raised her head and looked to the sky where behind all those clouds she knew someone was watching, someone knew what she had done. Silently she asked: “am I worthy of your love now?”.

…and she found herself nice little loving family and lived happily ever after and all that.

I´m so glad this little story is over, I can´t tell you how much I disliked writing this!
Beautifully done and told. what is on the ground? Leaking? Snow? Loved your series.
October 2nd, 2014  
@amandal Thank you Amanda. It´s actually not ground but wall and I didn´t do anything to it.
October 2nd, 2014  
Great shot
October 2nd, 2014  
but what does she see???????
October 2nd, 2014  
Fabulous! Fav
October 2nd, 2014  
Excellent.
October 2nd, 2014  
Tää on hienosti kuvattu, luulin että maassa maataan :) Taas kiinnittyy huomio kyllä ilmeikkäisiin kasvoihin, tossa on just sellasta tunnetta että maahan on mäjähdetty mutt ylös noustaan kohti parempaa. Hieno kuvakertomus, hyvähyvä! Ja nyt mun tekis mieli tehdä Spiderman-kuva tälleen samalla tavalla :-D
October 2nd, 2014  
Stunning.
October 2nd, 2014  
you are very creative
October 2nd, 2014  
Like her dainty feel against the rocks.
October 2nd, 2014  
This is so awesome!
October 2nd, 2014  
FAV! She is free! Life becomes a little dangerous but fun!
October 2nd, 2014  
Very nice! Your shots are really telling a story.
October 2nd, 2014  
Wow..what's happening...go angel go!
October 2nd, 2014  
Beautiful fallen angel
October 2nd, 2014  
Very creative.
October 2nd, 2014  
beautiful
October 3rd, 2014  
So creative.
October 3rd, 2014  
Great pose, light, composition. Fav
October 3rd, 2014  
@janim Siis todellakin miksi mennä maahan kun voi yhtä hyvin seistä ;-) Ja todellakin nyt teet sen hämiskuvan! Joo se on se ilme ja kehon kieli joka mullekin tässä on se juttu.
October 3rd, 2014  
wow this is beautiful
October 3rd, 2014  
Intriguing. May I ask why u hated writing this? What did u write it for?
October 3rd, 2014  
@creativeaddict Thank you Laur and yes you may. I didn´t like the dark and sad mood in this strory, I didn´t plan to write it in a first place and once I started, I had to finish it and there really was not much choice where I could go with it cos I already had the pics.
October 3rd, 2014  
Ethereal
October 3rd, 2014  
@tstb yes that can be interpreted any way you like ;)
October 3rd, 2014  
great story you have told and the images are beautiful
October 3rd, 2014  
A very poignant story, beautifully depicted by all your pictures. I see some desperation in her face.
October 3rd, 2014  
Very creative. Love it.
October 3rd, 2014  
@salza Than you Sally. Yes you are right, there is some desperation involved
October 3rd, 2014  
Love the series:)
October 4th, 2014  
Well, this may have started out as a sad or dark story in your eyes, but I could easily see a longer version which has a sub-story of redemption in it too. And perhaps the Loving Eyes that watched her leave knew she would be happier with a family and thus allowed her to go. Maybe in loving her new family she brought Him more glory as all angels are created to serve Him and bring Him glory. Oh well, now I am writing a story that perhaps was not your intent! I like how you used pov to create drama in this shot.
October 4th, 2014  
Your use of sc in this capture illustrates the story well.
October 4th, 2014  
Fantastic capture
October 7th, 2014  
@olivetreeann Thank you Ann, I like your storytelling!
October 9th, 2014  
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