Teddy Bears Picnic by graemestevens

Teddy Bears Picnic

When Ted left the house that morning, it was with a sense of dread and foreboding permeating his every fibre, from the tips of his cotton soft, plush ears to the velour pads of his feet. It niggled at the very back of his soft, fluffy mind and tried with every step he took to come forward, to scream at him inside his mind to not go to the picnic today.
As he walked through the neighbourhood that had been his home for the last 3 years, not even the warmth of the sun and the heavily scented breeze gently caressing his furry little cheeks could dispel these feelings, but as he took a bite of a honey coated biscuit, baked especially for today’s festivities, he told himself that he was just being silly and was probably still preoccupied with the small argument he had had two days prior with (other) Ted. It was sure to be nothing.
When Ted walked through a small alley between two fences, on the path that would take him down to The Woods today, he couldn’t shake the feeling of unseen eyes crawling over his fluffy pelt, assessing him, watching him pace his way sedately to the clearing at the base of the big tree where the Teddy Bears Picnic was to be held.
As he walked into the clearing it became evident to Ted, particularly as he felt cold steel pierce his delicate hide and slide toward his cotton wrapped heart, that he was indeed very sure of a big surprise today.
Great story and very funny shot. You should tag this for the mad hatters story challenge.
March 23rd, 2014  
@dh Thanks so much, and tagged - thanks again
March 23rd, 2014  
Nice composition here, Graeme. No doubt the neighbors were impressed?
March 23rd, 2014  
@bigugly Thanks - I did have one elderly gentleman give me an odd look as he walked past the fence...
March 23rd, 2014  
A stand out children's story parody. Should be a series! Well done.
March 24th, 2014  
@unfolding Thank you, much appreciated
March 24th, 2014  
lol, this is wicked - I can imagine you setting this up
March 24th, 2014  
@shannejw Thanks - there's so much "fun" to be had at my place...I may have even giggled at one point!
March 24th, 2014  
you photos are never dull, my fav is shocked ted in back ground, awesome
March 24th, 2014  
@kaharris Thanks, I quite like the vomiting one, hence the pile of cotton in front of him...but no Teds were harmed in the taking of this photo, just a small amount of tomato sauce wasted...
March 24th, 2014  
please do some wicked grinch like photos at xmas
March 24th, 2014  
@kaharris It's highly likely!
March 24th, 2014  
oh my! I won't be going out into the woods today! Fun set up, story, and shot!
March 24th, 2014  
@voiceprintz best to steer clear of the woods I think, especially if it's still on the lose! And thanks, appreciated.
March 24th, 2014  
This is so creative! I love it!!
March 24th, 2014  
@jess1204 thank you, really appreciate it. Great fun to do as well!
March 24th, 2014  
I loved this and for such a gruesome tale it made me smile. I must have a weird sense of humour!
March 24th, 2014  
Puts me in mind of one of my fave Red Dwarf Episodes: "That's something no-one should ever have to see." Very clever narrative and I love the posing of the bears.
March 24th, 2014  
haha love this. very creative shot, poor ted. kids would love this, in my experience they love a nice gruesome tale!
March 24th, 2014  
CSI Stuffed Animal Town...:)
March 24th, 2014  
This is magnificent - I love the teddy with his paws over his mouth - wonderfully creative, both in image and story! Well done.
March 24th, 2014  
@ceilidh @essafel @wearing0 @tasian @lynnilou thanks all, much appreciated...you say the sweetest things!
March 24th, 2014  
Love this, incredibly creative and v funny
March 24th, 2014  
@rachelwithey thank you
March 24th, 2014  
Ha. This is awesome. Great job.
March 25th, 2014  
@edie Thank you so much
March 25th, 2014  
oh now this is brilliant - barking mad, even...!
March 30th, 2014  
@northy thanks...much appreciated :)
March 30th, 2014  
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