Trial #2

Inspired by Joe @joemuli with his wonderful elongated, abstract beach shots.
The bright colours seemed to help but I didn't like the composition...

[Diana]

You're definitely getting there!

[tony gig]

Fantastic...

[Susan Wakely]

Interesting angles.

[Call me Joe]

I love this one too👌👌👌❤️

[Pam]

It is great!

[Rick]

Cool capture and framing.

[Ann H. LeFevre]

I think you're heading in the right direction with it though- maybe it needs to be stretched out a little bit more?