@kali66 super cool! Thanx 😊 it's a 'readers copy' and I'm actually reading one too and catching all kinds of small errors too. Like, how did I not notice some of these before???
@blueberry1222 I thought it was missing the bit about meeting Ryan and testing his travel skills ( sure i have read you recounting that at some point!) ... it kind of goes from splitting with the other guy and suddenly Ryan is there without introduction .
@kali66 hmmm...ryan is mentioned in the introduction. What chapter are you referring to? I've written so darn much that I could have easily overlooked something that critical. If you don't mind, can you plz point out where the mentioning of ryan out of the blue occurs so I can correct it? Thanx
@kali66 will do. Just so you know I appreciate your insights and 100% welcome your critiques. Shoot me anything via that email, too. Thank you!!! You're my bud! Love ya.
June 12th, 2021
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Thanks for sharing the link. The time lapse video of beautiful cactus flowers is absolutely wonderful!