it definitely needs work - the front woman is immediately too dominant - tho I think the animated pointing one may be OK as a contrast to the thinkers - also there is too much ceiling
BUT I think the edit is a bit overdone - I think I'd like to find the words rather than have them pointed out so strongly to me.
I think!!!
The two ladies in the front could be a separate cameo. I don’t think the lady in front wants to hear what the other is saying.
I definitely prefer the other photo and think you did a wonderful edit.
I like this one best….more to see & although the two women at the front rather dominate they are all interesting. You can see more if the architecture & that wonderful inscription. Technically the other one but for interest & nosiness this one for me!
This one is my favorite! I like the contrasts between all the people in the room. For me it provokes more potential stories as I wonder about each person. I also like that the words on the sign are easier to read. Just my humble opinion...
I much prefer this one, it's nice to see the whole room and what everyone is doing. Even though those two ladies at the front are a bit dominating I don't really notice as everyone is the same focus, my eye still goes to the two in the middle.
BUT I think the edit is a bit overdone - I think I'd like to find the words rather than have them pointed out so strongly to me.
I think!!!
I definitely prefer the other photo and think you did a wonderful edit.