Bare tree & reflection - critique please

December 5th, 2013
I've never done this before and I promise I won't do it often. I have two versions of a shot I took this morning in the fog. I meant to stick with the one that showed how it really looked, but I couldn't keep my hands off it. Does anyone have any preferences between the two? I don't know if I can put both in one comment. Here's the foggy one.



Here's the more colorful one.

December 5th, 2013
I personally prefer the top one -- the increased contrast in the lower shot has taken away from the fog, and it now looks more like it was just a very overcast day. There's also some texturing in the grey area to the right of the tree trunk which keeps grabbing my eye and distracting me.
December 5th, 2013
Yup. The top one wins in my eyes. There is nothing stopping you having both shots in one album on one day but you will have to put both pictures side by side and make them into one shot to do that (e.g. use Photoshop, Picmonkey or whatever you are comfortable with)
December 5th, 2013
Top one for me.
December 5th, 2013
The top one has the edge for me too as it has a more atmospheric feel. Perhaps the increased contrast shot would be more suited to a bright sunny day.
December 5th, 2013
Yes. You lose the fog in the second one, and any softness with it.
December 5th, 2013
@abirkill @steampowered @padlock @paulaw @mercuria Thanks so much! It's so hard to leave well enough alone - I appreciate the feedback that leaving it alone works!
December 5th, 2013
I agree with the comments above but I also like the increased sharpness of the second photo - it has an almost abstract composition, so for different reasons I like both very much, perhaps you should just treat them as two different pictures rather than compare them.
December 5th, 2013
@mariadarby Thanks! That's sort of how I feel about them. I was drawn to the reflection, so I wanted to emphasize it - but also, I'm not out in that much fog very often, so I wanted to record it. If they were in a larger group, so they weren't side by side ... food for thought!
December 5th, 2013
Yes the bottom one is just a grey autumn day not very interesting ,the top one has some mistique about it
December 5th, 2013
top!
December 5th, 2013
Definitely the top one - far more atmospheric
December 5th, 2013
I think I would love the bottom one done in black and white or maybe sepia.... maybe tweaked just a bit soft in LR
December 5th, 2013
Top
December 5th, 2013
Top as everyone else has pointed out.
December 5th, 2013
Top for reasons already stated.
December 5th, 2013
Foggy one
December 5th, 2013
Top
December 5th, 2013
Top for me too
December 5th, 2013
Top!
December 5th, 2013
Top
December 5th, 2013
Top
December 5th, 2013
Keep the fog. Fog is great!
December 5th, 2013
Tia
Top one definitely! Much more interesting and atmospheric
December 5th, 2013
I like the top one, but if it were my shot I have no doubt that I would have tinkered with it and uploaded the bottom one. I just can't help it.
December 5th, 2013
Love the atmosphere in the top one, in the lower one the sense of mystery has evaporated.
December 6th, 2013
Top...foggy
December 6th, 2013
@leighton22 @gozoinklings @jantan @darylo @frankhymus @taffy @momsta @lucypics @trishaclancy @annemary @bulldog @amandal @teejay14 @daffodill @espyetta Wow! So many responses - overwhelming, but in a good way! These "votes" have taught me a lot! Thanks, and thanks in advance to any new posts preferring the fog!
December 6th, 2013
@aponi Lol! I hear you!
December 6th, 2013
@acloserlookpbd Good suggestions - I'll see what I can do next week. The holiday season kicks off in town tomorrow!
December 6th, 2013
AC
Top... love the fog... if you still want to play around, you might want to try a b&w version.
December 6th, 2013
Top one, I love the fog. The second one doesn't look natural, but I like the reflection part of the pic.
December 30th, 2013
top one! Mystique and soft earth outlines. I don't like the sharp edges in second one
January 2nd, 2014
Definitely the top one as it's got a lot more atmosphere.
January 2nd, 2014
The top one because it shows how the tree and reflection really looks. Also, the reflection in the bottom one seems more fake while as the top one looks like it would in nature.
January 3rd, 2014
I love how the top one shows the haze and really brings out the emotion of the photo.
January 3rd, 2014
Bee
I agree I love the top foggy picture best. The second one I'd use to play around with, ie turn it upside down and use cropping or other tools to create something visually interesting.
January 3rd, 2014
the top
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