I've seen the posted video on deadpan and not sure I have the "intentionality" right...but here's a try at it. Let me know what you think please. Maybe more foreground to make it more "remote" and impersonal?
Hi Madelaine. I know nothing about this topic but what I read on Helge's post. He did say to have subdued colours and a very simple composition. I wondered if there was too much happening here? Could maybe just the central post with a background of some of the red and black squares simplify it? As I said - just a suggestion from someone who has no idea. :) Cheers Rob
@robz Thanks for all your input on "deadpan" I think you're right, fewer colors and simpler...hmm. need to look into this more inorder to do less! ty ty
I like the vibrancy and lines