early by lynnz

early

I would like some honest opinions about this photo. And don't just be nice! I can take some criticism (just this once anyway!) Is it too washed out? too light? Thanks!
I like your dof. I don't know whether it's technically too light on the left, but I quite like the contrast between the two sides - one light and quite busy with flowers and one darker and with more space. I wonder how it would look cropped to a square with less space on the right. I suppose the main thing is whether you like it.
July 30th, 2017  
@clearday Thanks so much, I appreciate your comment.
July 30th, 2017  
although that crop would lose the nice bokeh on the trees in the background which would be a shame - ignore that idea!
July 30th, 2017  
I think that softness reads summer - I like it
July 30th, 2017  
It's a stunning shot whichever way you see it. I personally would like it more if that light streak on the left were not there.
July 30th, 2017  
I agree with Diana...it looks a little washed out or too light on the left side...
July 30th, 2017  
Nice shot with lovely light. I would have perhaps tried a square crop to the right hand side but I do get a bit crop happy at times :)
July 30th, 2017  
I too would crop the left out of the photo. It takes away from the overall image. It is a lovely scene, would just be lovelier cropped, I think.
July 30th, 2017  
Personally I love the fade. I look for photo's like this on purpose. I would crop where the blurred out (weed) is on the left to keep the eye from going there. Otherwise I think you caught the sun and the details beautifully :-)
July 30th, 2017  
I think it's lovely but if you're asking for opinions on this one I'd perhaps crop the right of the image out. The light on the left is subtle - a complete contrast to the darker right side which, to my eyes, appears too distracting. My eyes were drawn to this part of the image first yet the flowers are the subject of the image.
July 30th, 2017  
The faded area along with the dof gives it a dreamy, summery look which is pleasant.
July 30th, 2017  
Looks good. I would do one more time at other times when the lighting is much less
July 30th, 2017  
Beautiful! Fav
July 30th, 2017  
I would be inclined to crop the left side, it feels too bright to me. It looks like opinions are pretty evenly split, so it comes down to what you like.
July 30th, 2017  
Love this!
July 30th, 2017  
I agree with Paul in cropping the right side. Love the warm summer colours
July 30th, 2017  
@hrs @ludwigsdiana @gardenfolk @rjb71 @louannwarren @mlwerkheiser @paul10 @seattlite @olenadole @kerristephens @merrelyn @kwind @carolmw Thank you all! I do appreciate your comments. This seems to need some cropping! I like the image but feel it's not as good as it could be and I always wonder if I REALLY have any idea what is good and what's not! I value your comments!
July 30th, 2017  
Lynn, I always love the softness and light airy feeling of your photos, and this one is no exception. I would probably crop it on the right, but just a little. If it were me, I would probably take out the stick on the right and put your logo in the area right above the lower flower. At any rate, it's a great photo with great dof and bokeh! I like your idea about asking for constructive criticism! Hope you don't mind, but I think I'll do that as well. It's nice to land your photo on the Popular Page but I want to grow and challenge myself so that's a great way to do it. Thanks for the idea!
July 30th, 2017  
Lovely dof and wonderful bokeh!
July 30th, 2017  
Lee
I like this shot its colourful and summery, cropping is one option, but you'd lose a good part of the image. I think darkening up the left hand side ever so slightly may help.
July 30th, 2017  
@cindymc @fayefaye @gamelee Cindy, thanks for your thoughtful comment, good idea about the stick. Thanks always, Faye. And thank you, Lee, I was wondering if it should be darker.
July 30th, 2017  
Lovely ❤️
July 30th, 2017  
Lovely light
July 31st, 2017  
Fav!
August 5th, 2017  
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