Day 043, Year 4 - Alexis & The Birthday Cake by stevecameras

Day 043, Year 4 - Alexis & The Birthday Cake

A snap from two days ago when Alexis celebrated her 7th birthday a day early with some of her friends from school. They had an 'inset' day on Friday ('teacher training day' when I was at school).

I drove down and met her, her friends, her mum and step-dad at the local water park, and spent 2 very fun hours going down water slides. It was very good fun, followed by some grub at Pizza Hut.

The later in the evening some more friends arrived for a very nice birthday tea with food, games, and even a magician...! Of course it was all topped off by a candles and the cake - a dark chocolate sponge with chocolate fingers and Skittles on top. Naughty but very nice.

I have left her friend Daisy in the foreground because if I crop in further, you can clearly see that I am focused on the back wall and not Alexis' face, but I also like her friends' expression as she was helping to blow the candles out as well.

This isn't the shot I imagined, but it's never easy trying to show this kind of scene without it being too dark, or getting some very blown out highlights with the candles and faces. I think some gentle flash would have helped. The colour balance isn't right and there is probably far too much shadow areas in the frame, but when I tried to open them up a little, it all became a bit too messy. I kept looking at the jpeg that was recorded along with the RAW and it looked much nicer as it was shot compared to the over-corrected RAW. I wonder what a pro would have done with this.

3 good things:

1 - Fun at the water park
2 - Pizza for lunch
3 - A great birthday tea and games in the afternoon
She looks so excited to blow out those candles.
February 14th, 2016  
Oh that is a wonderful photo......the puff in those lungs!!
February 14th, 2016  
Just beautiful. Stop thinking about what you could have done with this or that. Its a lovely natural shot. Must have been a fun day for all.
February 14th, 2016  
Adorable! She looks very happy!
February 14th, 2016  
Beautiful light and you captured the delight!
February 14th, 2016  
I agree - it is a really difficult shot to get right, and not the time to spend ages creating the right arrangement. Keeping the friend there definitely was the right decision - she adds interest and depth to the composition without taking away from the main subject. Lovely happy shot.
February 14th, 2016  
February 14th, 2016  
Daisy is the highlight for me. Great shot.
February 15th, 2016  
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