Broward Library_Diagonals(c)

This is a tighter crop on a shot I posted the other day. I'm not sure which works better, This seems like the tighter shot but then I lose some of the diagonal, which was the point. Would like to hear your input if you are inclined to give it. Thanks.
http://365project.org/granagringa/365/2016-10-01

[summerfield]

this is my kind of shots! silhouettes and stairs! aces!

[Jennifer]

This works even better! I hadn't noticed the lower person on the first image

[An Tonia]

Very nice composition. I like the way the two figures break the lines

[Bill Fenske]

I like this one better, nice cropping.

[Granagringa]

@summerfield I am flattered. Thank you for the comment and the fav!

[Granagringa]

@an_tonia Thanks so much for commenting and giving me a specific. Great for my learning curve!.

[Granagringa]

@jesperani @bill_fe Thanks so much...just the feedback I was looking for to keep me on that learning curve!

[Wendy]

Super shot. I think I like this better with a tighter crop.