Abandoned by bella_ss

Abandoned

Critique welcome. I'm trying to come up with a shot for abandoned. I wanted to do something different to the usual abandoned house or car. What do you think?

Thankful for - my mum. She's 87 and lives on her own. She has macular degeneration and her eyesight is going but she still makes beautiful handcrafts, gardens, cooks and so much more. I hope I'm doing all that she is when I'm 87.
i love the focus on the abandoned teddy - I think it speaks volumes
January 3rd, 2016  
A wonderful image Sheralee, the B&W really epitomises the sense of abandonment :)
January 3rd, 2016  
Jo
A lovely capture with beautiful focus.
January 3rd, 2016  
Instant fav. I love how you did this and the wonderful focus.
January 3rd, 2016  
Great!
January 3rd, 2016  
Fav! So creative!
January 3rd, 2016  
Lovely creative shot.fav
January 3rd, 2016  
Great shot fav
January 3rd, 2016  
Absolutely perfect, what a brilliant shot. It fits the bill exactly. A big fav.
January 3rd, 2016  
poor teddy, girl is growing up. your mum sounds like a really strong spirit
January 3rd, 2016  
Love it! I think it fits the abandoned concept perfectly!
January 3rd, 2016  
Outstanding focus and capture...Fav ....My Father is 87 and still go's on 10mile walks, my Mother's 85 and walks further than my Father, I hope I can do the same at that age.
January 3rd, 2016  
Lovely focus and tells a story, works great for abandoned Sheralee!
My mother is a widow and living in her own home, I'm hoping she will be doing the same at 87! So much to be thankful for!
January 3rd, 2016  
I love the focus on the teddy, such a fabulous story going on here. A big Fav.

My Dad is 94 and lives on his own and also has Macular degeneration (as do I, I was recently told at an eyesight test) and my Mum is 90 but unfortunately got taken into hospital on Boxing Day. I feel blessed that I still have both my parents even though they are on another continent. I hope I am as good at that age if I am still around.
January 3rd, 2016  
Great comp!
January 3rd, 2016  
Oh poor Teddy! He definitely looks abandoned and I think you have portrayed this well. Fav for this nice shot. My mother lived alone until 4.5 months before she died aged 91. We helped by doing her shopping, cleaning etc. but I am so thankful she managed until nearly the end when sadly she was the victim of oesophageal cancer. Bless her
January 3rd, 2016  
Toy Story 2016.
January 3rd, 2016  
This is very evocative... it really tells a story. I am reminded of "Toy Story," when I see this photo; riffing off of that movie, you could put the toy under the bed (assuming you can lay on the floor and see underneath) and try shooting the toy from that point of view... abandoned and forgotten, under the bed. Maybe some girl's shoes, etc, in the background? I really like how she is painting her nails and growing up, in the background, by the way.

So glad you have you mom, who seems still active and busy. What a blessing!
January 3rd, 2016  
Yes I think it fits the bill perfectly. Well done
January 3rd, 2016  
Oh I think you have nailed the theme. I love your point of focus, and processing.
January 3rd, 2016  
Super focus and dof!
January 3rd, 2016  
Super focal point. Really like this.
January 3rd, 2016  
I like it. I think if the girl in the shot would be turned away from the teddy it might strengthen the "abandoned" theme. Not sure how to compose it then though :)
January 3rd, 2016  
@tonygig that is fantastic Tony, sounds like they will be around for some time yet.

@radiogirl So do I Kathy

@elaine55 I hope your mum is okay Elaine, it must be hard when you can't just go and visit. Sounds like you have good genes.

@rosiekind another wonderful story of longevity Rosie. We (my sister and sister in law) also clean and take Mum shopping.

@mcrt haha, yes!

@rosiekerr I love that idea Rosie! Thank you!

@vera365 I like that suggestion too Vera. She is painting her nails but my dof is a little shallow for that to be really clear. I didn't consider that when shooting.
January 3rd, 2016  
Wonderful focus on the teddy. He does look abandoned.
January 3rd, 2016  
I just had a thought that if the girl was cuddling a doll it would add to the abandoned theme!
January 3rd, 2016  
Each time I scroll through the picture feed I stop here. Such a great image.
January 4th, 2016  
I think there is no need for critique - it's a wonderful shot! :)
January 4th, 2016  
This is fabulous and perfect for the theme, fav
January 4th, 2016  
@shepherdmanswife Another great suggestion! I think I will have to do some more of these.
January 4th, 2016  
@mcrt Thank you so much Mike!!
January 4th, 2016  
I think this is terrific.
January 4th, 2016  
This is poignant and lovely.It works so well for the theme.My Mom is in her 80s too.I too am thankful for everyday with her.
January 4th, 2016  
A very poignant photo
January 4th, 2016  
This just says it all :) Fav
January 4th, 2016  
I like this. The little girl has abandoned teddy for jewellery or make up that is up near the mirror. Very clever. I really like Rosie's idea of a toy under the bed too.
January 4th, 2016  
Wonderful dog...and tells a good story. Perfect for b&w. Good for your Mom...such an inspiration.
January 4th, 2016  
Great composition and B&W!
January 4th, 2016  
Beautiful picture with great composition and DOF
January 5th, 2016  
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