When I requested for you all to critique my picture I received two sofar who suggested I crop it a little. so here it is. now I'll try to see if I can copy the comments.
Here is what I said in the first picture:
Critique please
I had a hard time deciding which picture to choose. out of the 200 I finally picked this one of our granddaughter riding Patten. he is the sire of Georgia`s foal. I used Sports as the camera setting to get the action. because Patton`s coat is very dark I had to lighten the picture to show details and muscel tone. I would appreciate your suggestions.
please view these two links for a picture of Shayely`s horse Georgia and her foal Paradisa. (the one on the right)
http://365project.org/bruni/365/2012-07-29
http://365project.org/bruni/365/2012-07-28
Here are the comments of the previous picture which I'll now delete by deleting the first picture and bring these ones into the proper place in my calendar.
Sherry Owens McNulty
beautiful Bruni!!! But I'm a big horse fan! Lovely pony this one!
I like to reply
@shamrockinmom
Thank you for your coment on this picture.
if interested please read the following Stats on Patton
16.1 hh - dark bay color
2.01 registered approved German WB
2008 champion - Canadian AWB performance test
highest scoring WB in Canada
jumping index champion - score in 9 for jumping.
Ann H. LeFevre ace wrote
I think this looks good. You could crop it evenly on all sides and eliminate the boards in the lower right hand corner if you wanted. That would also enlarge the picture a little and further bring out some of the detail.
@olivetreeann Thank you Ann for your suggestion. you're so right..I just did exactly that and the picture looks great..now if I only knew how to change the picture once it's on 365. I probably can copy the comments and paste them to a new upload..I thing it's worth it or do you know of a better way?
Ann H. LeFevre ace
@bruni I know you can take this shot out and then load the new and improved picture into that date. What I don't know is if these comments will stay on this date once you take the first picture out. I know you can't keep the comments with the regular 365 account, but I think with an ace account you can. I changed my picture once and I just don't remember if the comments stayed or not. My thought is that you have to change it in the edit mode somehow and that's what keeps the commnets. On the other hand, if the comments aren't retained, then you could just ask people to comment again in your new commentary.
@olivetreeann I went and reposted the picture under September 25 an when finished with copying the comments I eliminated the 24th picture. this one way to do it but very messy. pls. look below where I copied and pasted the first comments.
Kerri ace wrote
I think this is beautiful but I think if you cropped it (removed the distracting object from the bottom corner), it would be better.
@kerristephens
Thank you Kerri I just cropped it and reposted it.
Carol white ace
I agree with Ann and Kerri,but a very nice action shot!!
@carolmw
thank you Carol. I just copied the older comments to this new picture.
comment from Bev.
(for some reason I can`t get her name copied- she said:
Excellent shot! A great action shot. I do agree that you should crop out the boards. You do that in the picmonkey right from here and you wouldn't have to change out the photo. The horse is absolutely gorgeous!.
WHAT’S DRESSAGE
by Julie Newman
There are a lot of confused people wondering just what dressage is all about and for some reason it is often explained in a way to make it sound more confusing. My interpretation is that it is training to enhance the natural movement of the horse.
A horse likes showing off to other horses but it is difficult with a rider until the horse can learn to carry more weight with its hind legs and lighten the front end. Most horses are seen "jogging" with weight on the forehand, legs shuffling out behind and very little lift. Dressage encourages the horse to take strong upward steps with bounce.
The whole training process is designed to gradually strengthen the horse to be able to do a range of movements that require great physical strength and a good partnership between horse and rider to perform in natural beauty.
The rider must balance the horse and aim to give lighter aids to gain a better result.
To achieve this the rider must first be balanced and not rely on the reins or gripping for support. The rider must work on their balance in the seat to be sure they are not putting more weight in one seat bone than the other and that one hip is not further forward than the other. They must have equal weight: to hold the weight of the leg) in the stirrups and legs long and in the correct place for giving the aids. The rider must carry their arms and hands and not lean on their own hips or rest on the horse. Correct position can be checked in any book and it is a gradual process to achieve it, keep the primary aim of keeping the hands separate from the rest of the body right from the beginner stage. The legs must not grip but cuddle the horse and the rider should think of feeling the hair of the horse and not squashing the horses insides out.
When an aid is given it is an electric touch then off and try again. This needs to be reinforced with a touch of the whip (not sharply) if ignored. Firstly "Ask" if ignored …"Tell" if ignored …"Demand" . If ignored… try the sequence again (perhaps it was misunderstood). It will encourage the horse to respond on the first gentle "ask" command but be sure the horse is not confused and never punish them in a way to cause stress. The difference between ask and demand is the difference between an invisible and a visible aid. Consistency is very important. Never allow your moods to "demand" without "ask" and always reward by voice or a pat.
The rider must assume the role of the teacher and gently explain what is required. No student likes to be yelled at for no reason, why should a horse be different. Whisper your aids... don’t shout them. They cannot speak our language, you must explain what you want and they will want to continue to learn.
As the rider progresses from training the basic priorities of "forward, rhythm, balance and straightness" they can start to encourage the horse to step under themselves more but the rider must be light in the saddle, very flexible in the lower back and have a light independent hand. Hold the reins as though you are holding a childs hand, if the horse leans, briefly drop the contact forward for a second and drive the horse under more (tap, tap, not squeeeezzzzzeeee). Do not pull the horse back, feel as though you are pushing the horse under and allowing the back to bow upwards. A common beginner fault is to resume a "foetal" position and pull which makes the horses back bend the wrong way or hollow. The rider must open up and stretch tall, hips forward and in balance. The horse will become more comfortable to ride as they gain balance, rhythm and spring.
Collection is more difficult and an instructor will assist the rider to apply the corresponding restricting aids when the back foot lands and the propelling aids when the back foot is about to step forward. This is when the horses natural paces start to really improve and gives you bounceability. Any backward blocking of the rein will prevent the inside hind legs from coming forward properly.
Competition dressage is judged on the paces, impulsion, submission and the riders effectiveness over a series of carefully prepared test movements. It is the judges responsibility to give guidance to the rider to tell them if they have consolidated the horses correct training enough at the level required before advancing. The national levels are: preliminary, novice, elementary, medium and advanced. The international levels are Prix St George, Intermediaire 1, Intermediaie 11 and finally Grand Prix. Most competitors start off at unofficial levels before progressing to the more demanding official competitions.
Dressage is a sport of beauty and is only possible when there is a true partnership with the horse and rider. The skills are difficult but once learnt will help the rider to improve any horse and help both horse and rider enjoy any discipline. It is a great sport, please join us.
You can make pic`s to fill a year. A child`s play : watching the clouds and tell to each other what you fantasize to see