So I tried to go dark with my photo for today... and I don't know what to think. I like it and its pretty cool since its of my friend but it might be to dark?
Cool idea great motion but in my opinion the vignette is too over done if even needed. I think if you simplify the photo with a nice crop you don't need the black vignette. The lower lower left hand corner is bright and taking away from the pic. Your subject is also center. Maybe if you crop the bottom left, remove the vignette that will off set your subject, lighten it up some, and make your photo off center.
I don't think it's too dark. I like the concept (and motion) but it seems like you're focusing on the tiles on the wall to the right? But maybe that's because it's not moving while the focal point of the photo is.
Other than the the fact that it tilts towards the left a bit so could do with a straighten I think its great in colour and tone and you have captured the movement well.
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Try it, it may or may not work.
But overall not a bad concept