Walking to the bus by kiwichick

Walking to the bus

I really wanted to make this photo work. I tried a portrait and landscape crop and finally settled on a square with a cant. Does it work for you or should I just flag it?? It is just so sweet when they all hold hands... Any editing opinions greatly welcomed :)

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Quick frame it and get it up on your wall. Precious.
May 29th, 2012  
I like this...I don't think anything needs to be done!
May 29th, 2012  
It's quite lovely,very cute!!
May 29th, 2012  
I think it's a great picture!!! The combination of the kiddies with the mountains in the background is awesome!
May 29th, 2012  
Very cute! And love the processing!
May 30th, 2012  
I like what you've done with it! I like the square crop and the tilt with the processing...it all works nicely together.
May 30th, 2012  
@tinatmmc Thanks Tina. Is there anything you would change? Add some noise maybe?
May 30th, 2012  
I personally wouldn't add noise. The only thing I would suggest is maybe take the contrast down a bit. The kids look a bit washed out while the trees are a bit dark. For a little creative touch, you could play around with a vignette, but I would make it very, very slight...to a point you can hardly tell you used a vignette. It also might be fun to try to do a subtle overlay. I like to use www.pixlr.com/o-matic/ occasionally to add touches like that. Just a couple thoughts!
May 30th, 2012  
@tinatmmc Thanks for the comments. The original image was rather overexposed so the kids merged into the street. That's why I had upped the contrast so much! I think I did add a little vignette already (must have been very subtle!!). I'd love to add an overlay but I wouldn't be able to for the course as we're only allowed to edit in photoshop RAW. Hmmm, I'm thinking I should just flag this one to submit. Bummer though as I liked the idea.
May 30th, 2012  
I think it's great as is...I wondered about being able to use other edits for your course. I only suggested it to add some fun, but it doesn't need it. And the contrast thing was just minor...definitely use it!
May 30th, 2012  
@tinatmmc I really do appreciate you advice though. I'll try and tweak it a little more and see what I can come up with! I've just emailed you another shot...
May 30th, 2012  
Gorgeous photo of the 3 of them - I always wish I have my camera handy on the school run...maybe tomorrow...or tonight on pick up...
May 30th, 2012  
Mel
i think its lovely! very nice indeed!
May 30th, 2012  
sweet!
June 1st, 2012  
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