A Thousand Springs by pflaume

A Thousand Springs

CW - Critique welcome.

I visited these beautiful waterfalls with my photography club on the weekend. The water springs from the sides of cliffs. There are countless springs varying in size. This one was the largest we saw. I experimented with a variable neutral density filter for the first time. It was fun to create the smooth effect of the water. This shot was an 8 second exposure. I am curious as to whether this is the right shutter speed? Too long, too short? Any other comments or suggestions are welcome.

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Top Twenty - Week 198
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It feels right to me.....the foreground is very sharp, and there is plenty of detail while you captured the silky, flowing water beautifully.
March 25th, 2014  
Well I don't know what I'd do differently - this looks perfect to me, and definitely a fav. I think the long exposure works really well in smoothing the water. Those falls look spectacular.
March 25th, 2014  
You captured the water perfectly. I like how it came out - the detail in the foreground is clear. I think you did well with this.
March 25th, 2014  
Beautiful capture of the water, and great detail of the foreground.
March 25th, 2014  
Stunning, fav!
March 25th, 2014  
Pea
Wow! What an amazing capture. The water is perfect! Big fav!
March 25th, 2014  
Pea
ps. IMHO I think the 8 second shutter speed has worked perfectly. The cliffs in the foreground are sharp so provide the perfect contrast to the moving water
March 25th, 2014  
Lovely shot, this looks right, but slightly shorter or much longer exposures can change how the water appears quite a lot. It also depends on the amount and speed of the water. If I try these, I end up with a load of shots that are identical except for the water, and then have to pick which is best. This looks best.
March 25th, 2014  
what a beauty .. easy Fav ...and I am digging the large view of these images ... really easier to appreciate these awesome images .. !!
March 25th, 2014  
Looks Great
March 25th, 2014  
Gorgeous. Love waterfalls!
March 25th, 2014  
That is gorgeous!
March 25th, 2014  
Looks perfect to me, smooth and milky asd it´s supposed to be, I really love that magical glow on the stream especially at the left right, I´d say 8 seconds seams to be perfect for these kind of shots
March 25th, 2014  
So beautiful and great shot!
March 25th, 2014  
Oh my!!! So incredibly beautiful!!! I am dying to find just the right spot for a silky water shot! You definitely found that here!! Fav!
March 25th, 2014  
Very impressed. Have yet to try this. Lovely saturated colours.
March 25th, 2014  
So beautiful, looks absolutely stunning to me. Can't help with critique unfortunately, my shot would have none of this amazing quality if I took it :-)
March 25th, 2014  
WOW, Outstanding capture and a Instant Fav Lisa.
March 25th, 2014  
Wow, the effect is amazing!
March 25th, 2014  
Lisa this breath taking you can feel the force of that water - amazing fav
March 25th, 2014  
lovely shot and what an amazing waterfall to be able to shoot,
March 25th, 2014  
I love it. For your consideration only, though, I went to an outdoor photography workshop last summer and when we went to the waterfall the instructor told us to try for a 60% rock-40% water ratio in our composition. When I compared my 75% water to my sister's 40% water images I found her's more appealing to my eye. Still, I had fun. You might play with some crops aimed to take out some of the water just to see if his suggested ratio appeals to you.
March 25th, 2014  
@aecasey Thank you, April! I never thought about that. I figured more water less rock was better. I actually cropped out some of the rock on the right to accomplish that. I will play around. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2014  
So beautiful and technically executed.
March 25th, 2014  
Great shot, I think you've captured it really well :-)
March 25th, 2014  
Fantastic!! Love the silky water!
March 25th, 2014  
Wonderful details. It's amazing what one can do with an ND filter.
March 25th, 2014  
I have serious silky water envy!

One thing I noticed, and this may just be me... I found my eye bouncing back and forth between the crisp foreground and the silky water without really coming to rest on a focal point. For me, the falls are the star of the show and the colorful rocks in the foreground are the supporting actor. But because the foreground is in sharpest focus, it draws my eye away from the falls. April's suggestion to try including more of the surrounding rock might remedy this. Of course, if it makes you happy as is, that's what counts, right? Good job on your new experiment!
March 25th, 2014  
@aecasey I was told similar info when I took my course last fall. Wonderful Lisa - just watch out for the overexposure in the water. I hope to get the ND filter this summer to play with. You are now making me want to go through my water photos from the fall season. I may just post one tomorrow since I miss seeing moving water (rather than frozen)! ;)
March 25th, 2014  
The detail in this is amazing. You have captured nature at its best!
March 25th, 2014  
love the softness waterfalls! Great capture!
March 25th, 2014  
Wow, this is so beautiful. Fav!
March 25th, 2014  
Beautiful - I think this was about right because it's not too smooth but still has that milky feel.
March 25th, 2014  
Beautiful silky water!
March 25th, 2014  
FAV-u-lous..
March 25th, 2014  
I wrote a long comment before then lost it. I love the exposure here Lisa and the crop, however it is interesting to try different exposures and compositions to see which pleases you the best. I went on a photo walk with Canon yesterday and we shot a small waterfall but I got more of the foreground in because I was shooting on one of their cameras and it was a wide angled lens so I couldn't use my ND filter, it was suggested to me to change my white balance to give a different effect than my first shot and I thought it worked well and preferred it. I am sure yo must have taken quite a few different shots. Anyway it's a fav from me.
March 25th, 2014  
Phenomenal Lisa! I love your composition, the blurring of the water and the browns and greens of the vegetation! This is definitely worth a fav!
March 25th, 2014  
No criticisms Lisa. I love it as it is. Fav
March 25th, 2014  
Gorgeous!!!
March 25th, 2014  
No criticism at all, this is magnificent. Fav
March 25th, 2014  
I think this is bang on, a brilliant shot. Fav
March 25th, 2014  
I love these long exposures. So well captured. Great scene Lisa
March 25th, 2014  
This is like paradise! Fantastic composition and motion capture with the water Lisa.
March 25th, 2014  
Fabulous!
March 25th, 2014  
Rik
Love the look of the water
March 25th, 2014  
My favorite part of this is the POV you chose, Lisa. I also learned a lot from the thread so appreciate your posing the question. I just love the water and was drawn to it immediately, and did not find the sharper focus on the forefront to be an issue as I thought it was a framing device for the falls. Wow and fav!
March 25th, 2014  
It's a fabulous shot - I wouldn't change a thing! Makes me want to dig out my filters and tripod and go looking for moving water
March 25th, 2014  
Wow.............love the silky water and sharp foreground.
Great shot...............and a fav
March 26th, 2014  
This is gorgeous!
March 26th, 2014  
Simply amazing...and faVulous with the new format! Breathtaking! FAV
March 26th, 2014  
just divine - love that slow shutter exposure on the water - big fat fav from me!
March 26th, 2014  
holy crap... A FAV for sure!!!!!
March 26th, 2014  
Beautifully composed and exposed! Fav!
March 26th, 2014  
Beautiful and a perfect veil of waterfall :)
March 26th, 2014  
Fav! Stunning!
March 26th, 2014  
I like everything about this capture. The water is soft and beautiful and yet the land at the right is sharp and colorful. Nice light too. It works for me!
March 26th, 2014  
It looks perfectly beautiful to me in every way! fav
March 26th, 2014  
Whoa! I think this is perfect. If this is where I think it is, you made the choice to include just the bottom half of the falls, when everyone else would do the natural thing and include it all. That choice filled the frame beautifully. An obvious fav.
March 26th, 2014  
@rvwalker Hi Ross, thank you so much. I'm delighted you like it. I think you do know where this is. It is the falls near Ritter Island which I recall you visited on your way home from Boise last summer. Unfortunately, Ritter Island was not open but we did enjoy photographing the falls.
March 26th, 2014  
This is gorgeous, Lisa. Perfectly captured. A fav. Lisa, I loved meeting you on our visit. I hope we can do it again sometime.
March 26th, 2014  
@sansjuan Hi Nita, thank you so much! I really enjoyed meeting you, too. It was so fun to get together. I hope we can do it again soon. Next time we'll have to go on a walk on the Greenbelt.
March 26th, 2014  
I think you did an amazing job of the waterfall! Just beautiful!
March 26th, 2014  
Ooh la la! Fav!
March 26th, 2014  
awesome!
March 26th, 2014  
Just beautiful! I love the colors and the soft look of the falls!
March 26th, 2014  
This is beautifully done. Love it. Fav.
March 26th, 2014  
Fav! Exquisite!
March 26th, 2014  
Such a peaceful and gorgeous capture! :) x
March 26th, 2014  
W.O.W.!! Fav oh Fav! I love looking at it closely and seeing all the detail in the foreground.
March 26th, 2014  
Beautiful shot! I love this area and always come home with some good keepers. Which camera club do you belong to? I have been wanting to join one in our area.
March 26th, 2014  
Awesome capture and I love your choice of shutter speed to achieve the water effect...beautiful.
March 26th, 2014  
Oh, Lisa, this is just fantastic and beautiful. Fav.
March 26th, 2014  
I cannot possibly critique this. Fav xx
March 26th, 2014  
This is so beautiful! a fav for me! :D
March 26th, 2014  
@silverback5 Thank you, Jeff. I participate in a Meet Up group called Boise Photo Walk. You should check it out. http://www.meetup.com/Boise-Photo-Walk/
March 27th, 2014  
Stunning and a fav!
March 27th, 2014  
Wow! This is so stunning. A fav for sure.
March 27th, 2014  
Fabulous picture!
March 27th, 2014  
wonderful catch !
March 27th, 2014  
Lee
Great shot. A wonderful example of long exposure imaging.
March 27th, 2014  
For my tastes, beautifully done, great silky water capture. Are *you* happy with it? If yes, then it was the right shutter speed for this shot whatever the rest of us think. :-)
March 28th, 2014  
The only thing wrong with this is that I wish my screen were 6 ft wider. Brilliant, it has everything. Composition, colour tones, perfect water movement with lovely white to blue tones. Fav, many times over. Expect to see it in the T20 later.
March 28th, 2014  
Congrats on the T20 Lisa, sorry I missed this when you posted it. You go, girl :)
ps I agree with Sean, I wish I had a huge screen to admire it, too!!!!
March 28th, 2014  
This is gorgeous! I think you could have pushed the exposure just a bit longer to brighten it up slightly, but either way, this is fabulous!
March 28th, 2014  
Such a wonderful long exposure shot. Fav!!!
March 28th, 2014  
Congrats on TT Lisa. Well deserved.
March 28th, 2014  
love the misty water.....
March 28th, 2014  
Fantastic waterfall shot!
March 28th, 2014  
Congrats on TT, Lisa!!
March 28th, 2014  
Beautiful capture Lisa!
March 29th, 2014  
Stunning - congrats on TT
March 29th, 2014  
No surprise at all that this made the TT, Lisa, It's a dream shot of this scene.
March 29th, 2014  
@rvwalker Thank you, Ross! I am really pleased, too - especially since it was my first go with an ND filter.
March 29th, 2014  
@gwynkm Hi Gwyn, sorry this response is delayed. I just wanted to thank you for taking the time to offer a critique. I really appreciate it. I can see what you mean about the rocks competing with the falls. i will experiment on toning down their colors.
March 29th, 2014  
@kass Thank you for your feedback, Kass. I appreciate the critique. You are right. It's easy for the highlights to go too far in a shot like this. Hoping I can adjust in LR. Thanks again.
March 29th, 2014  
Congrats on the TT :)
March 29th, 2014  
So glad to see this on TT Lisa! Fabulous image!
March 30th, 2014  
so beautiful!!! fav
March 30th, 2014  
beautiful shot! congrats on TT
March 30th, 2014  
Fabulous water shot Lisa. Congratulations on top twenty.
March 31st, 2014  
Wonderful capture ...
April 1st, 2014  
@elaine55 Hi Elaine, sorry for my tardy reply... I wanted to thank you for your detailed comment. I appreciate the tip about the white balance. That is something I don't think about when shooting. I know it can be a great creative element that deserves consideration. Your Canon photo walk sounds like great fun and learning opportunity.
April 1st, 2014  
Mac
Just gorgeous! And I learned something new from your being open to a critique, thanks!
April 1st, 2014  
Well done on the Top Twenty Lisa!
April 1st, 2014  
Congratulations on the TT! So well deserved!
April 2nd, 2014  
CONGRATULATIONS Lisa! This is very well deserving of the Top Twenty!
April 2nd, 2014  
wow! what a fantastic capture! love this!
April 4th, 2014  
Simply gorgeous - FAV
April 9th, 2014  
Another stunning water shot.
April 9th, 2014  
Excellent effect with the water flow. Fav!
April 10th, 2014  
Judging from the exposure of the land, the shutter speed was perfect for the specific filter. The slower your shutter speed, the more misty the falls will become, creating a softer effect, like the effect you have here. The sharpness of the plants in the fore- and background is, in my opinion, essential in this kind of shot to "anchor" the picture...you want to capture the movement of the water, not an earthquake! So, extremely well done (I think!)!
April 10th, 2014  
Wow this is so beautiful! Perfect exposure making the water silky and I love the composition! Congrats on TT! Fav from me - sorry it's a bit late!
April 11th, 2014  
Oh Lisa this is just gorgeous, wish we were allowed "superfavs" for the really special ones
April 12th, 2014  
This is beautiful...........this is another of your stunning shots I have missed, I've followed you for ages, but you are not showing in my feed and I must have missed so much :( FAV
April 14th, 2014  
Instant fav. I love my variable ND filter. I'd say you aced this at 8 seconds.
April 16th, 2014  
This si stunning. I had a look through your pictures and am so amazed about them. You have a new follower!!!
April 22nd, 2014  
Oh my! This is heavenly!
April 28th, 2014  
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