My Attempt

This is my attempt at ac-kenna challenge. I admire Michael Kenna’s photos but I don’t know how to achieves a real black tone to give this photo a body or bone. I hope that I can resolve it one day.

[Taffy]

This is great with wonderful negative space.

[Lisa Stein]

Very cool shot! I like the minimalism.

[Angela Tavan]

great shot ! Have you tried increasing the contrast in PS?

[Jacqui Paterson]

Nice. I like it.

[tingliu]

黑白分明

[Alicias]

This looks awesome. It would make great a great computer background.

[Carol W]

Love the negative space and the minimalism. Very striking image.

[Ksenia]

Wonderful capture, it looks so fragile and vulnerable! Did you try in 'correction'-> 'Selective color' and to correct there black colour to increase black?(Sorry, if I told you puzzling I just translated from Ps in Russian) :)

[Kareen King]

You're definitely on your way! I actually this this is quite stunning!

[Yao RL]

@ksyu Yes, I changed it to black an white and increased the contrast a little bit. The white space is there already.

[jenny tucker]

i love the negative space - - really nice composition and execution of this shot.

[Ian McGuire]

I do enjoy stark and minimal....well done....

[Ann H. LeFevre]

You did a great job! It took me three tries to get the black in my last shot to the tonal quality of his shots. Lovely shot.