mind the gap  by helenhall

mind the gap

I'm asking you not to mind the gap in my 52 week challenge since this week we were supposed to be working on humour, in a creative manner. And, I think the absence of humour has created a bit of a gap in my project thus far this week.

The challenge left me completely stumped, despite my constant observation for a suitable scene.

I did think about working on the story of my train journey yesterday, which had me sat with my nose practically in the toilet cubicle. The comings and goings were constant and not everyone could work out how to lock the door. Often, humiliation can be humorous right? So the moment when I lifted myself off my seat to press the close door button to ease the discomfort on my sensitive nose, and attempted to do so in one swift and unobtrusive move, could have given rise to humour, as I promptly plonked my backside down onto the floor - my seat having closed back to its vertical position. But everyone pretended not to notice and the misery of the journey merely intensified. I might have been arrested had I got the camera out.

So all I have to offer - as a place holder - is my attempt to brighten up the dull grey wet day that was, with a bit of added colour.
You want to be careful of that platform - there's something not quite right about it ;)
April 29th, 2018  
Oh Helen. You do have some adventures in your life. What an awful train journey. You have found lots of colour in your photo though.
April 29th, 2018  
Your mishap was not humorous, but I like the idea you had to turn the photo- it's definitely funny because your mind is trying to figure out how the "wall" can be built that way!
April 29th, 2018  
Oh dear, it doesn't sound like a journey you would want to remember with a photograph anyway. The platform makes a cool wall, the design could catch on!
April 29th, 2018  
oh dear. what a journey :( fabulous bands of colour & texture here
April 30th, 2018  
Your story reminds me of that Chris Rea song about the highway to hell, only yours was a railway. I love the photo and the bands of different colours and texture.
April 30th, 2018  
Lovely ...
April 30th, 2018  
Sometimes adversity can be humorous in hindsight.
April 30th, 2018  
Super composition!
April 30th, 2018  
Smiled at your narrative -- great storytelling and a lovely industrial image.
April 30th, 2018  
Well find. Great composition.
April 30th, 2018  
That story sure had me laughing
April 30th, 2018  
This is one of those moments where I think if you don’t laugh you’ll cry! I do like this shot!
April 30th, 2018  
Hahaha...your story is humorous, indeed! I hope you aren’t sore! And I like your colorful shot :)
April 30th, 2018  
Great composition
April 30th, 2018  
fab lines & colours
April 30th, 2018  
Ha-ha! Your narrative had me laughing this morning! Such a cool image! Really like the colors and lines! :-)
May 2nd, 2018  
Oh dear poor you, it's the kind of thing I would end up doing as well. I did cobble something together for this, last minute, it is fairly pathetic though. You got some excellent lines and colours for this shot and while I empathize with the predicament you found yourself in, the way you wrote this made me smile, ergo there is your humour...
May 2nd, 2018  
Just started following you and your story made me smile....a good start! I love this shot too.
May 3rd, 2018  
But those stripes of colour and texture are very satisfying
May 3rd, 2018  
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