different, it is, i say. but the strip of light is actually quite intriguing. i'm also sort of imagining a leg or a hand or hints thereof would also add more interest and intrigue. or a wad of money, or a shoe. i shut up now. great work, as always!
@davidtom tx! I kinda struggled w the pov... Low to the ground and I lost the geometrical aspect of it... And the gun wasn't recognizable... But i think you're right... The image is too static somehow... I shall have to see if there are other and better ways of using that bit of light...
I think this works just fine Mira - what I really liked was the unspoken corollary to this - I noticed the strip of a light... and I just happened to have a gun about my person!!
I like how you spotted the strip of light and decided to use it.