Critique this, please! This is a concept I may have to return to as this isn't the best possible execution; but anyway, this is my morning commute - now made more exciting by looking for photo opportunities!
My first critique is: keep your hands on the steering wheel! The perspective is interesting in that it confuses the viewer (or this one at least) - you know it's a rear view mirror, but it feels like your shooting into a window and the car is driving into the oncoming traffic. Does this make sense? As for composition, and light etc, I'm not really qualified to comment.
I had a similar idea and posted mine here: http://365project.org/mimiducky/365/2012-02-15. :) Except I'm not a morning person, so I usually shoot sunsets rather than sunrises, and evening commutes rather than morning ones.
Yours is more focused, I think, so that there is less outside 'noise' so to speak.
June 21st, 2012
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I had a similar idea and posted mine here: http://365project.org/mimiducky/365/2012-02-15. :) Except I'm not a morning person, so I usually shoot sunsets rather than sunrises, and evening commutes rather than morning ones.
Yours is more focused, I think, so that there is less outside 'noise' so to speak.