Compose Yourselves

February 14th, 2012
I should really be posting a pic right now, since I'm 3 days behind (sorry) - but I thought I'd catch up on your shots instead, AND start a series of discussions for keeners like myself who would like to learn more about the Rules of Photography. I've heard it said that you should learn the rules first, and then break em (and not the other way around, apparently!) I'm not claiming to be any sort of expert. In fact, just the opposite - so I thought this would be helpful for anyone else in the same boat. Anyways, thought I'd start with composition, ie: the rule of thirds, etc. Post a shot of yours that relies heavily on composition to make the shot - with a few words about it, if you feel so inclined. I'll start with this one, although it's a bit of a bad example, since it technically breaks the rules of composition, being divided exactly in half - but the way it's composed is the reason I loved the shot so much. Let's see your compositions!
February 14th, 2012
Is that an older looking Alain Delon in the shot?
February 14th, 2012
@sabresun I'm going to say sure, why not? Since I have no clue who that is.....
February 14th, 2012
@pwallis Cool, tough guy from French cinema.
February 14th, 2012
@sabresun ahhh, Then yes. It's totally him! Now where's your composition shot;-)
February 14th, 2012
This is just a silly shot of my kitty and i had to go and break the rule of thirds;) it just looked best when the focus was in the middle. i took some with her off center, but decided this one was best......even if it did break the rule!
February 14th, 2012
Great idea, Ms Paula!

I do a lot with the rule of thirds, but break it too. This shot was captured trying over and over again. I originally hated it, but once I plugged in the rule of thirds, I like it more.

February 14th, 2012
@paulaag rules shmules! Who cares when you're that cute??
February 14th, 2012
@cfitzgerald I just love those colours! Perfect rule of thirds shot:)
February 14th, 2012
@sabresun oooh, he's all badass. I like him:)
February 14th, 2012
@cfitzgerald , courtney, this is such a beautiful shot!
February 14th, 2012
I really love this one from this week. I love how the heart points towards the light and is lit just enough that you can tell what it is.

February 14th, 2012
@lolanae oooh I need to catch up on your shots! I missed this one and it's lovely.
February 14th, 2012
This one actually won a rule of thirds contest.

February 14th, 2012
@mikehamm Beautifully shot, and composed!
February 14th, 2012
I was going to do an old one, but I really like today's shot!
I love how the shoes really stand out :)
February 14th, 2012
@pwallis - Thank you, Paula.
February 14th, 2012
I love your discussion and like you I should be posting pictures rather than replying but hey! I like the composition in this one with their heads at one end looking into the picture. Is that what you mean?? ;)
February 14th, 2012
@cheyrebecca I love those shoes!
February 14th, 2012
Is this rule of thirds? I thought it was. I tried other crops but like this one the best...
February 14th, 2012
@kiwichick it does follow the rule of thirds, so yes:) Heads in one third of the shot, looking towards the negative space in the other two thirds! (I'll post a shot tomorrow that I think you might like;-)
February 14th, 2012
I didn't like this pic after I posted it, and after reading your thread, I now know why. I broke a rule by dividing in half.
February 14th, 2012
@espyetta I think it is - the focal point is where it should be. The branches in front maybe take away from that a wee bit, but it's a beautiful shot!
February 14th, 2012
@elizabeth264 that's exactly why I wanted to post a series of discussions like this - to get these conversations going. And I don't think dividing a shot in half is breaking the rules per se - sometimes a little symmetry is called for. But in my shot there's no symmetry at all, but I still liked it:)
February 14th, 2012
i've been making an effort to try rule of thirds... the pigeon is a good example... my original crop had his eye dead center... that seemed intuitive to me... but once i recropped as below, it felt better... but it still doesn't quite come naturally to me!


February 14th, 2012
@northy nor I - I still have to fight the urge to center things.
February 14th, 2012
Ok, I just usually shot what looks "good to my eye" which is probably not technically correct. This is todays, I thought it looked liked the rule of the thirds.

February 14th, 2012


I think this shot works because he is not centered and he is looking out of the frame. I use the rule of thirds quite a bit and find that I like the overall composition better if the subject is not perfectly centered.
February 14th, 2012
@pwallis
Keeners?
February 14th, 2012
@mej2011 I'm a geek:)
February 14th, 2012

Working on thirds, bokeh and capturing the moments I like best.
February 14th, 2012
I'm really bad about sticking to the rule of thirds. I'll do it occasionally if it feels like the right shot for it, but most of the time....nope. I had to search for awhile to find one of mine that actually used the rule of thirds and looked decent. An oldie but a goodie.
February 14th, 2012
how's this? :)

February 14th, 2012
February 14th, 2012
Um, I should be working or at least commenting, but Paula you have lured me into this, you seductress, you. Even though it isn't perfect, I really liked the composition of this because I tend to like things in threes. So the woman, her shadow and the rock formed a triangle I found pleasing, especially compared to the rock jetty receding and the golden weeds advancing in opposite directions.

February 14th, 2012
I end up, quite a bit of the time, centering my shot, then cropping to the rule of thirds after the fact. That way, I'm sure of a good sharp focus. Too many times I've composed in my camera lens only to find the thing that I really wanted in focus, wasn't. So that's what I did with this one.

February 14th, 2012
@webfoot you know, that honestly never occured to me. That would solve a lot of my soft focus issues when it comes to composition. Thanks for the tip! (Also that's a beautiful shot)
February 14th, 2012
It's a "face" on the side of a donut box. The "nose" is the flap that goes into the "mouth" when the box is closed. If I didn't compose my shot this way, it simply wouldn't have worked.

February 14th, 2012
February 14th, 2012
Anyone that has dealings with me knows I am a strong believer of the rule of thirds so I thought I would post two photos that use those principles.

The first is a selfie where I placed my in the frame to give mood as there is a dark negative space. The dramatic light helps



The second is some bullets I put on the 1/3 across and 2/3 down. I also had the lines of the table move across and up the image to lead the eye into the bullets and the trail of blood to both lead the eye away, while making the viewer think about what the image is all about.



February 14th, 2012
This image uses diagonals in the composition and the focal point is on the diagonal line, although it is exactly in the middle of the image!

February 14th, 2012
I think this photo works because of the rule of thirds, the negative space is filled with the soft tulle and pattern. You also follow the line from the toes to the top of the {my} legs :)
February 14th, 2012

This relies heavily on rule of thirds, and vertical stripes, which draws your eyes down to the strawberry.


love this one too. Draws your eyes up the road.
February 14th, 2012
A typical diagonal composition:



... rule of thirds:



February 14th, 2012
A number of comments on this picture suggested that it did not follow the rule of thirds or composition, but worked regardless.
February 14th, 2012
@pwallis Thank you very much, Paula! Learning so much!
February 14th, 2012
I was happy with the composition of this one, and a couple of comments also made note of the composition. Think the rule of thirds applies to this one

February 14th, 2012
Generally my landscapes are well in "landscape" and follow the rule of thirds. This one breaks it but has been received very well. Sometimes composition does over "rule" it.



This one follows the thirds rule.

February 14th, 2012
@pwallis But wouldn't your shot follow the rule of thirds since your subject is in the right hand 3rd even though the red bar splits the picture......just wondering. thanks for the post, I can never look at enough pictures!

February 14th, 2012
@jtrudell I think it technically breaks the rules because the shot is divided in half and has more than one focal point. If the pole wasn't there, I think it would be composed according to the rule of thirds:) Your snowy shot is LOVELY!
February 14th, 2012
February 14th, 2012
@webfoot I do it that way all the time. I often feel like I take too much time if I try to compose in the camera. It's easier to get the shot, then go in and crop to get the composition I want.
February 14th, 2012


This is one of my favorite kinds of shots...the classic "reflection turned upside down". I think that part of the reason that they work is because they confuse your brain a bit at first, and make you take a second look. Another reason that they work is because they are usually a bit brighter and shinier that the real thing. In this photo, the leaves floating on the water look like they are flying about, which just looks wrong, but so right at the same time. I could be wrong, but I think it breaks more rules than it follows.
February 14th, 2012
Ems
I am learning the rules after the event too and composition is something I find really difficult. Often I know what I want to see but can't make it do what I want! Some days I get it, some days (such as todays...I really don't). But this shot was yesterdays and I think the composition worked pretty well (given that I don't know 'the rules'!!)

February 14th, 2012
The scattered helms and swords etc lead your eye in and up the picture, to the warrior lying on the top third line, with his head/body over on the right third of the picture. The sword in the bottom left balances the helm in the top right, giving a bit of a diagonal to break up the static feel. This one took a bit of cropping until I was happy with the feel of it.
February 14th, 2012
This definitely follows the "Rule of Thirds" as the snow line follows the top third, and the subject is at the intersection of the top & left third. Brings your focus exactly to the snowflake.
February 15th, 2012
I initially took this one as quite a centred shot as I wanted to have the flexibility to play around with the composition in post. Once I cropped it, it seemed to have more of a draw to that wonderful wooden door.

February 15th, 2012


Leading lines
in this shot the arc of the harbour promenade and the railings lead the eye towards the lighthouse this is the composition of leading lines, this is also the compositional element that works in @claireclinch road picture and @flagged picture of the Jetty, lines which lead the eye into the picture giving it depth, you should be careful using leading lines as they can draw your eye away from the point you want to focus on.
February 15th, 2012


The rule of Symmetry
another rule that is often overlooked keeping the shot symmetrical, this is the rule in force in all those under the boardwalk shots also @paulaag cat shot and @myautofocuslife box face shot are influenced by this rule.
February 15th, 2012
I feel like this is a good example of the rule of thirds because the subject is contained in one 9th of the total image.
February 15th, 2012


Rule of framing
besides having a leading line in the path this shot also has a natural frame made from the trees on either side this is the rule of framing, this style of composition works with all manner of objects holes, arches, bridges the list goes on
February 15th, 2012
@asrai Thanks for the clear explanations and demonstrations Lee:) I found those helpful as well as beautiful.
February 15th, 2012
I never learned the rules either, but I do try to use thirds whenever I can. And odd numbers in general.

February 15th, 2012
February 15th, 2012
1 /3th:
And a natural frame:
February 15th, 2012
I haven't read up on the rule of thirds (tisk tisk) but it seems that I just do it without thinking.
I'm pretty sure this is a good example....

and this one is too..

but what about this one?
February 15th, 2012
February 15th, 2012
@shutterbugger I'm not sure if that last one follows or breaks the rules of composition, but it works, sooo that's good, right?
February 15th, 2012
@pwallis I don't know! It works for me...I find it pleasing to me eye :) Would it better full frame? I think it would lose something
February 15th, 2012
I spent some time framing this shot to follow the rule of thirds so the path would be on the left vertical line and the horizontal path on the lower one.



But in this one I made sure to put the horizon in the middle as I felt the rocks in the foreground and the sky both deserved attention.

February 16th, 2012
Re: the thread title (Compose yourself).

After my most recent terse response on another thread, I really do think I need to compose myself.
February 16th, 2012
@jonesp such beautiful scenes!
February 16th, 2012
@cluvlj haha! Nothing wrong with speaking one's mind now and then:)
February 16th, 2012
February 16th, 2012
In this one, 'Stroppy Poppy', the leading line of the lead takes your eye to the dog, but also literally underlines her eyes, emphasising the look she is giving me! LOL!
February 16th, 2012
@jenirainbow aww Poppy. Don't be stroppy:)
February 16th, 2012


Pasted from my photo description...

"In regards to composition - there is a basic rule of thirds here, with the tree, her face, and the negative space all taking about 1/3 of the frame. The break of the rule is in having her eye - the focus - in the centre of the frame. This was carefully framed and shot, and only one shot taken."
February 16th, 2012
@pwallis Hahaha! She looks like butter wouldn't melt, but she'll trash the house if I go out, little minx! Remind you of anyone? :-)
February 16th, 2012
@shutterbugger - i think the last one relies more on leading lines - BTW it is stunning!
February 16th, 2012
This one was a fibonacci spiral composition. I had the composition in mind when I took it, but it was difficult to judge by eye alone. I used the crop overlay tool in lightroom to get it spot on. Turns out my eye was pretty good, I only had to crop it a tiny little bit :)

oh and for anyone who is not familiar with fibonacci composition.... here is a link that explains it: http://www.digital-photography-school.com/divine-composition-with-fibonaccis-ratio-the-rule-of-thirds-on-steroids

February 16th, 2012
I know I'm late to the game but here are some of mine:

Leading Lines







Rule of Thirds







February 16th, 2012
@limpet365 fabulous composition! And I've never heard of this before - thanks for the link!
February 16th, 2012
@pwallis Thank you! Glad you liked the info :( I like your first "cut in half" shot too!
February 17th, 2012
Thank you so much for this thread with so many wonderful examples. I'm soaking it all in! New at all this so really trying to compose using 3rds without having to crop too much. This shot I took lots of (as the clouds moved unhelpfully!) trying to get the power pole in the right spot. I tried having it on the LH side, but it didn't look right. Now I know why.. the lines had to lead to it. I'm learning!

February 17th, 2012
@limpet365 I read that article a while ago. I agree, its difficult to picture it in your head. Good work on just having to crop it a bit :-)
February 18th, 2012
@jonesp Thanks :)
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