Woman's Day by kevin365

Woman's Day

Mothers, don't forget, are daughters first
and, therein lies the rub.
for every move they make
there is an overdub.
a strip of ground
between two faces,
a fragile weave
of different places
where the new love lies

A sanguine string connects them both
And tattered ends are tied with love
And patches sewn are done, unknown
Cause that's what they were shown

Sisters, Aunts all act the same
They are taught from very small
Love the next and make it right
And family over all

The recipe of life, passed down
However incomplete and poorly versed
Is witnessed, done in daily life
By Mothers who were daughters first
Jae
Awe! That's beautiful! Pretty good girl hands too!
May 14th, 2017  
beautiful and thank you
May 14th, 2017  
Bravo Bravo! Perfectly composed without glossing it all over unrealistically! It's a wonderful weaving on what, for me, was a lovely day!
May 15th, 2017  
@lifepause A simple realization and that girl's got everything:) Thanks!
May 17th, 2017  
@annied Thanks and you're welcome:)
May 17th, 2017  
@Weezilou So very happy that yours was a lovely day! As it should be! I am surrounded by wonder filled women, they don't need gloss:)
May 17th, 2017  
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