one more shot but the sky is still grey by quietpurplehaze

one more shot but the sky is still grey

Thanks so much everyone for your response to my request for some constructive criticism on my shots yesterday - lots to think about. I walked down to the church this morning to take a few more shots and here's one. The sky was blue when I took Jinks out first thing but quickly turned grey - again.
And thank you also for your interest in my 'light through some leaves' shot which put it on PP (just, I think!)
Perfect! This was the angle to get for sure :) The ironwork on the light arch is a nice touch and the arch frames the door perfectly. FAV!
November 7th, 2013  
@linah

Thank you LInda - your comments and the fav make up for the blue sky deserting me!
November 7th, 2013  
It looks lovely, so inviting!
November 7th, 2013  
Nice its starting to tell a story, the open door, where else does the path go, how much more of the church is there. If only you had blue sky
November 7th, 2013  
Nice shot, Hazel. Ideas? work on the contrast of the two posts, to make them stand out as "frame" for the photo? You could either select them and then use brightness/contrast or the dodge/burn tool.
November 7th, 2013  
@floyd12

If only - it was blue about half an hour before I took the shot but the dogwalk has to come first! Like the idea of a shot telling a story.
November 7th, 2013  
@gooner46

Chris, thanks and yes, I did think of the posts as a sort of frame. But I do very little processing and I think I probably don't even have the software for what you suggest.
November 7th, 2013  
Great framing of this wonderful shot Hazel.
November 7th, 2013  
I much prefer this one - the open door, and losing the heavy trees had improved it a lot I think.
I would have avoided the lamp lining up with the roof though ..
No, lets be honest, I would have wished I had when I saw the pic rather than planning it right at the beginning!
November 7th, 2013  
This concentrates more on that wonderfully welcoming door Hazel & the beautiful archway of the light shows up clearer!
November 7th, 2013  
This is much better, but it's a bit of a muddle where the lower edge of the lamp clips the top of the church roof, and the structure on the roof to the right of the lamp (a stone cross, perhaps?) isn't helping. It needs some more daylight in that area, which means going even lower....
November 7th, 2013  
Love the arch way framing up the door. Bet it's lovely with the lamp lit.
November 7th, 2013  
@pistonbroke

Pete, I'm definitely not sitting on the wet churchyard path, even for 365!
November 7th, 2013  
@pistonbroke @rvm

When I meet the vicar out with his alsatian next time and can make myself heard above Jinks' frantic barking at it, I'll see if he'll maybe move the lamp! I've already asked him about the horrid cable attaching to the front of the church but he said he needs it for electricity!
Seriously, it's very interesting to hear what other people see, thanks for feedback.
November 7th, 2013  
This is lovely, the door opening is a bonus too. Great re-shoot
November 7th, 2013  
@quietpurplehaze We shall have to sort that out then!
November 7th, 2013  
Yes, this is a nicer composition so you can be confident of the help all your friends are giving you! I really must get down to some serious photography sometime!
November 7th, 2013  
@quietpurplehaze I always carry one of those green plastic garden sheets in my bag for just such a time. Amazed how many times it gets used
November 7th, 2013  
really like how you positioned the church door in the arch and with the path leading me through the photo up to the door, lovely
November 7th, 2013  
Very nice - but I would say that, wouldn't I! I even like the half-open door. Excellent composition and POV. Fav! Chris has got very technical, you'd have to have a grounding in Photoshop - and I'm not sure if that is the way you want your photography to go, Hazel. And those PS tools take some getting used to, I still fight with them, and often feel it's 'hit & miss'! @gooner46
November 7th, 2013  
And at the end of the day it's 'the eye of the beholder'! @gooner46
November 7th, 2013  
You`re a quick learner dear Hazel. Perfect and beautiful.
November 7th, 2013  
@ivan

You're quite right - the most editing I want to do is crop, straighten the horizon, perhaps an occasional sharpen but I don't feel I should need to do the latter with my new cameras. Crop is probably my favourite tool and on the photo course I've learnt to think about how I crop the shot when I actually take it - I think it was something I was doing without realising. Thanks for the fav! Nothing I fancied for photos inside the church but it was lovely and warm in there.
November 7th, 2013  
@pyrrhula

And you're very kind! I suppose that I actually LIKE learning - all sorts of things - as long as numbers are not too important in the subject matter.
November 7th, 2013  
@quietpurplehaze Sounds sensible - enjoy your photography the way you feel happy about it. You are getting some basics to add to this enjoyment through your course. :)
November 7th, 2013  
Great composition Hazel, the open red door makes the shot for me. I would say cropping is probably my favourite too too, I think I get a bit too crop happy sometimes!
November 7th, 2013  
The slightly open door adds the perfect note -- is someone about to step out or has he just gone in?
November 7th, 2013  
oh wow!!! you did it! exactly how I pictured it! great walkway up, hedge at the sides and the lamp above the door...you got it ALL!!! GREAT JOB! FAV!!!
November 8th, 2013  
and I didn't even notice the gray sky...guess that is because it is normal for here
November 8th, 2013  
Isn't it great to make progress within 24 hours! You are a quick learner. @floyd12 I may have to think about just this item. Wanted to get low today but wet ground.
Can't wait for next lesson
November 8th, 2013  
@andreajoy

Andrea, I think you have to ask for the lesson under a specific pic! I'm getting some very specific constructive criticism on my shots in the photography course and it does make you stop and think! No gain without pain!
November 8th, 2013  
@vickisfotos

Thanks very much, Vicki, shall have to ask again!
November 8th, 2013  
@catwoman2

I think somebody was in one of the side rooms in the church - the door is usually closed so that was lucky timing.
November 8th, 2013  
@paulaw

Ditto on both counts, Paula!
November 8th, 2013  
Really lovely composition. Actually, I think the grey (or almost white!) sky adds a bit of an otherwordlyness to the picture.
November 9th, 2013  
Great composition.. very nice capture!
November 10th, 2013  
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