Bathtub Blues by fiveplustwo

Bathtub Blues

@luvthyclassics

Please release me
if you will
for your blue hues still
fall down around me
from time to time
and I'm caught up in a moment
caught up in a rhyme
which brings me back into a place
where your beautiful face
is close to mine
and we are floating in the lake
water all around
but there is no water now
nothing in which for me to drown
except my memories of you
these memories colored blue.

beautiful as ever
October 18th, 2013  
Wow emotionally charged image and poetry. Sad but beautiful!!
October 18th, 2013  
♥♥♥
October 18th, 2013  
fav
October 18th, 2013  
Nicely composed and edited - as always!
October 18th, 2013  
very evocative, you are good at conveying wistfulness
October 18th, 2013  
-a backward glance-
definite emotion conveyed... love the whimsy coupled with the slate tones.
October 18th, 2013  
Beautiful!
October 19th, 2013  
cool
October 19th, 2013  
Deeply beautiful
October 19th, 2013  
Meg
This is very pretty! I think that the words go perfectly with the image. You express yourself so eloquently.
October 19th, 2013  
@houdiniem @acloserlookpbd @gavincci @billjohnson @mikegifford @kali66 @lindseying @kjarn @twr @gigiz @megstorey

Just wanted to thank you all so much for your wonderful comments and favs, they mean so much to me :)
October 22nd, 2013  
@luvthyclassics THIS IS AWESOME
June 6th, 2014  
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