Hawaii Cloudy Sunset  by jgpittenger

Hawaii Cloudy Sunset

This is a bit over HDR for my taste. It was 3 bracketed shots put together in photomatix. It was dramatic to be there and the HDR expresses that but I think it is a bit overdone. Opinions?
Fascinating colors and tones. Great capture.
February 27th, 2013  
LOVELY!
February 27th, 2013  
Beautiful
February 27th, 2013  
Gorgeous!! Love the tones and sky.
February 27th, 2013  
I think that HDR serves a purpose, and here it served that purpose very well! This is certainly dramatic! My guess is your naked eye captured the back half, and you're noodling whether you like the front half of the image? I like it!
February 27th, 2013  
Wonderful HDR shot, love that slice of yellow that lightens up the shot!
February 27th, 2013  
It is really dramatic.
February 27th, 2013  
I sometimes wonder what people mean by HDR. There are so many options/levels in photomatix that its possible to balance the light so that its not overdone. I don't think this is overdone btw. I think its very dramatic without looking painterly.
February 27th, 2013  
I don't think it's overdone either. I think you get enough light in the foreground to get some detail and I don't think the colors are over-saturated. Its a great shot.
February 27th, 2013  
Now that's drama!!!! Love it!
February 27th, 2013  
Vee
Yes, beautiful and dramatic...it does have an HDR quality to it but not so much that it takes away from the beauty of the scene. I suppose it's a subjective thing.
February 27th, 2013  
Well I do like a bit of HDR myself Jane & it makes for a wonderful 3D textured photo here.
February 27th, 2013  
heel erg mooie foto
February 27th, 2013  
I think you have done it well. It has the drama but not overdone. Great looking shot.
February 27th, 2013  
Caz
Love the drama in this shot !
February 27th, 2013  
The upper 2/3 is magnificent. I wonder if the whites are just a tad hot in the lower part, but that is picky. Beautiful scene.
February 27th, 2013  
Gorgeous scene here, and who am I to discuss HDRs?
February 28th, 2013  
I'm not sure what the sandy beach looked like, but I like what the processing did to the clouds. I don't like what it did to the sandy beach and the water in the foreground.

It also looks like you might have a dust speck on your sensor in the upper portion.
February 28th, 2013  
I don't think it has that "hdr look" so it just shows the drama of the beautiful sky. However the beach looks a bit odd, almost like ash. Maybe the sand is too bright?
February 28th, 2013  
Awesome shot.
March 1st, 2013  
@rvwalker @webfoot @anwan Thanks for the thoughts. I think you are right that the white is too white. It is bleached coral not sand though. I think I will re edit this when I get home and have my usual way to do HDRs and maybe post it again. Suggestions though re what I might do differently to have it not be to odd/hot in Photomatix?
March 1st, 2013  
@jgpittenger Sorry I'm not familiar with Photomatix, but in Photoshop Elements I would be tempted to try the burn tool, or Isolate that section and darken it a bit with levels.
March 1st, 2013  
@rvwalker Thanks. I can take it into elements and do that
March 1st, 2013  
Jon
To my eye this is a great shot as it is.
March 1st, 2013  
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