Your Breath Was Shed

POEM

Your breath was shed
Invisible to make
About the soiled undead
Night for my sake,

A raining trail
Intangible to them
With biter's tooth and tail
And cobweb drum,

A dark as deep
My love as a round wave
To hide the wolves of sleep
And mask the grave.

(Dylan Thomas)

[*lynn]

fabulous light! fav

[Kerry]

That is lovely. Can imagine it enlarged and hanging on a wall.

[Gerry]

Beautiful and a fav

[Julie Duncan]

@lynnz Thank you so much, Lynn! :)

[Julie Duncan]

@mskez1 Thank you, Kerry! That is quite a compliment! :)

[Julie Duncan]

@gerry Thank you very kindly, Gerry! :)

[Charlotte]

Love the illuminating feel to this, great effect.

[Julie Duncan]

@cgarner Thank you, Charlotte! :)