I Remember Love by kevin365

I Remember Love

Furtive writing without a care in the world of how it is received
A kite without no string
Knowing, for what it is, it will be believed,
And praying that one Soul will sing

Hours spent scratching out
As if my thoughts needed to wrestle with what I know
And I how I grow
And, like a child's first meal,
With nothing left to conceal,
I would serve it up
And leave it be
For one, in her solitary

Never has there been a better selfish purpose
Working on a rhyme
Hoping that I would get the Girl
And knowing she was mine

Final draft complete, tri-folded
I'd walk it up the darkened streets
A stroll through sleeping neighborhoods
When the trees were quiet and the air was still
And leave it in Her windowsill

There is no purer feeling
There is no greater good
Than to share what it is that your feeling
And to believe that it's understood
Jae
Wow! Yes! You wrote and captured all of it perfectly! I was and am right there - a moment ago forever! And I have every single one!
June 30th, 2016  
Excellent! Photo and poem. Excellent!
June 30th, 2016  
Very evocative, both the words and the pic
June 30th, 2016  
Makes me think of a sail of a boat !
June 30th, 2016  
Very impressive shot!
July 1st, 2016  
I believe it is
July 2nd, 2016  
Beautiful. .... no words Kevin
Fav.... the thought and sentiment.
July 11th, 2016  
speechless in the presence of these heart-warming words...

Brings to mind a sermon of years ago... When you pray, believe your prayers are heard.
July 22nd, 2016  
such creativity!
July 28th, 2016  
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