Alley by kjarn

Alley

I liked all the lines and colours.

CW - critique welcome

Three good things:
1. The last day of the working week
2. Successfully completing module 3 of my on line photography course
3. Awesome weather for autumn
I will offer a croption if I can. Trim the right side to line up with the salmon colour and trim the bottom so that the left hand lower corner meets that diagonal line. And I'd probably crop the top to be closer to the cross member?
March 15th, 2014  
@bobfoto thanks for your input, how's that?
March 15th, 2014  
Mmmm. It's really good but I think you can do what Jason is suggesting by tilting to make the bottom edge dead straight against the tilework.
March 15th, 2014  
@swilde thanks Sue. I've already edited cropped this as @bobfoto suggested and I think it looks a lot better than how I first did it. I would love to straighten that bottom edge but when tilted to correct it, the side goes wonky.
March 15th, 2014  
@kjarn - I think it has a little more impact now. And yeah, I want to straighten the image so the tiles line up, but can see how that would lean the uprights off to the right. Tricky situation. I'm thinking maybe you could have shifted your feet over to the right a little to ensure you were dead centre?
March 16th, 2014  
@bobfoto there were people behind me waiting to walk down there so I had to be really quick. I thought I was standing in the centre but obviously not.
March 16th, 2014  
@kjarn - I reckon you have only just missed the centre by an inch, looking at the line of tiles... I know the feeling of having to fire off the quick shot!
March 16th, 2014  
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