This doesn't work as well for me. For me the colour brings out detail that isn't as clear in this shot. This has its own merits but I instantly fav'd the colour and didn't feel the same draw to this one so...xx
I like this one a wee bit better because the same umbrella and person holding it is still the eye-catcher but the distracting colors along the upper left corner are no longer there to distract me. Plus the B&W you chose with the yellowish tone is pretty in itself.