I think to make the original better, I will have to wait for spring. I think I was trying to get the tree shadow as well as the iris and their shadows. So all I could think to do to improve this one was to correct the perspective. Here is the original: https://365project.org/shutterbug49/365/2023-04-21
@beryl I see that. It would have been better to mute the shadows, recognizing the irises as the subject. Here the subject is confusing. Thanks for the feedback.
I like the shadows. I don't know if you plan to play with this one , but I wondered about a quite heavy crop to just keep the trio of 3 flowers and shadows ... Cheers Rob
The tree shadow however, to me, is just a little too overpowering.
Those gorgeous Iris's are so strong & tall..