Italian Graduate re-edit

I took this photo in March 2019, on my last time visiting @Caterina when we saw graduates happily celebrating around the city. Recently, it came up on my Flashback Friday and I realized I could have done a better job editing it. But I hope I didn't take it too far. Do you think I might have? Maybe dial it back a little?
Original: https://365project.org/jyokota/365/2019-03-31

[Allison Williams]

Looks joyous to me.

[Rick]

I think the re-edit works very well. Don't think it needs to be changed any more.

[Maggiemae]

How could this be better - real emotion, top focus, a lovely model!

[Rob Z]

What a marvellously happy image. :)

[Casablanca]

This is a beauty of a shot, full of pleasure and happiness.

[Peter Dulis]

sweet

[Allison Maltese]

A wonderful and appealing shot.

[Merrelyn]

I think this looks great.

[Esther Rosenberg]

Learning and improving is part of this fun experience. This is beautiful !

[Antonio-S]

Very good moment!

[Jane Pittenger]

Beautiful smile