design feedback

Would love some feedback on the design I've been working on to put on merchandise. One can spend so many hours ....

[Kerri Michaels]

great design fav

[Mags]

Nice! Grabs attention.

[Beryl Lloyd]

A great poster - tells the message loud and clear ! fav

[Brigette]

nicely done.. Nicely attention grabbing with a strong message! and who could deny that face!!!

[Granagringa]

Love the message...a little too "beheaded" for me...maybe a little more of neck?

[KoalaGardens🐨]

@granagringa thanks for the feedback!

[Babs]

Love the message, but I agreed with @granagringa I think the whole koala would look good rather than just the head.

[m.taylor]

I like it. Graphic designs are so time-consuming with so many options. I think you did really well. Thanks so much for following my project and for the help with linking a photo in the forum. You are so blessed to live with these gentle creatures—beautiful photos. Keep up the good work.

[Danette Thompson]

I agree with @granagringa . I’d also put more space between the lines of text at the top and maybe remove the curlicues.

[Harry J Benson]

Nice design and wording; the only thing I can think of is instead of white branches going through the word world some other colour.

[Pigeons Farm]

Such awesome work, that unfortunately will never be to everyones tastes. I absolutely love the message, but for me it is far too busy. Maybe not enough of Bullet showing and the font size too big and to many styles?

[KoalaGardens🐨]

@kgolab good feedback! I sure won't please everyone but it's great having fresh eyes look at things

[KoalaGardens🐨]

@mtaylor oh my pleasure - graphics suck up time like anything, but they suck me in too. I'm truly so lucky to live with the koalas, and I'm making the most of it!

[KoalaGardens🐨]

@onewing Now to get a photo of a whole koala that would suit and not be obscured! my aim for easter 🤣

[KoalaGardens🐨]

@hjbenson thanks for that!

[Rick]

I think it works very well like this.

[Pigeons Farm]

@koalagardens I have looked back through some of your old photos and maybe some like these with tree or leaf space would work well for you, or something similar
https://365project.org/koalagardens/365/2020-10-03 https://365project.org/koalagardens/365/2019-07-26 https://365project.org/koalagardens/365/2017-01-04 https://365project.org/koalagardens/365/2021-03-29 https://365project.org/koalagardens/365/2020-09-12 https://365project.org/koalagardens/365/2020-03-23

Just a thought.

[Valerie Chesney]

I am not good at anything like this But. I would like to see more than the koala's head, but, then the words would need to be smaller.. some wonderful comments here...

[KoalaGardens🐨]

@kgolab oh wow that is so kind of you to look through for these! I'm taking them on board for sure thank you 🐨💚

[Wylie]

Looks great, like a street sign at the moment. Agree with other comments. Could you bear to lose some words to make it less busy?

[Issi Bannerman]

Fabulous!

[Monique]

Like it !

[Merrelyn]

I like the message but agree that it seems a bit "busy". I wonder if cutting down on the different font styles and sizes would also help.

[Sue Cooper]

A great message but I too would like to see a bit more of the koala and for it to be a bit less busy.

[jo]

Like the colours and words, just a little too busy and agree with the issue of just having the head'displayed'. Great work you do.