One step closer by artsygang

One step closer

In order to comply with the requirement of the gang to not be so harsh on ourselves, here is another attempt at rendering a street scene at night. I'm not there yet, but I surely am one step closer.
Thanks for your support and encouragement!
I most certainly appreciate any ideas or suggestions or critique you have.
@monikozi
Oh that is fun. I like the light splays. Probably the trees would be less colourful and much darker as they are backlit so strongly? But I like the feel of it. Good atmosphere.
May 31st, 2022  
I like this. It does not look or sound like it's easy trying to show a night street scene. @monikozi
May 31st, 2022  
@monikozi - fabulous rendition, monika. very commendable effort. i like it.
May 31st, 2022  
@casablanca The trees seem backlit because I did not paint too close to the foliage... :D My intention was that they have some light on either side, where the lamp light would reach the foliage.
Thanks a lot for the suggestion.
May 31st, 2022  
@salza It's darn hard when there's not a referrence image (live or photo). And when the skill is poor. And when the knowledge about how the light should behave is also poor.
Actually, it is a completely different approach from day scenes. And it came to me like a blow in the back of my head.
Thanks for the support!
May 31st, 2022  
@summerfield Thank you, Vikki.
May 31st, 2022  
@monikozi I love your determination.
May 31st, 2022  
@monikozi This is more what I had in mind with the lights! Well done. My only suggestion would be to soften the edges of dark a little more for a less sharp lin between light and dark. Easy to say for me and probably NOT as easy to do. So well done here with a definite feel of night time girl!
May 31st, 2022  
@wakelys Well, as long as it lasts. Thanks.
May 31st, 2022  
@grammyn Oh, I read the comments in reverse order... :D Yes, you are totally right: that light needs to transition more softer into the dark. Absolutely accidentally I managed somehow to do that on the pavement... more or less, especially on the cobble stone. There, I lifted up some colour while it was still wet.
Thanks a lot!
May 31st, 2022  
@monikozi I hadn't noticed the stones or pavement but you are so right. Fabulous results for the technique
June 1st, 2022  
I like this, my only comment (and its certainly not a criticism because you've done a fabulous job) is that the lines between light and dark would look better softer.
June 1st, 2022  
@kjarn Kathy, I really need points of view. So, criticism, or not, it is useful and I appreciate your taking the time to look and give an opinion. As I said somewhere, I do not have reference photos or experience or tutorials. And what I have in my mind about light and dark is totally wrong.
Eventually, i noticed too that that line is too sharp for the light coming from a street lamp. Even if sometimes light in the night seems very sharp edged, the transition is rather diffused. Thanks!
June 1st, 2022  
I like this one very much. The only time I tried something in watercolour at night was in my caravan intake night shot and this is so much better. Ok maybe the light of the lanterns is a bit to hard ( maybe if you tried it in goache on top of the night painting) but overall it gives a very good night feel.
June 1st, 2022  
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