Come, follow me !!--- by beryl

Come, follow me !!---

Again on the mere -these two were following one another in the dappled shade of the weeping willow !!
Help, constructive criticism please -- something not quite right !! there seems to be too much highlighted background in this !! would it have been better if I had cropped off the upper 1/4 of the shot ? I think so !!--this would make the geese prominent in the shot !! ?
June 26th, 2013  
very beautiful Beryl
June 26th, 2013  
nice one.
June 26th, 2013  
Sweet and lovely shot
June 26th, 2013  
So very pretty.
June 26th, 2013  
I love this shot Beryl! In answer to your question, I think the white area at the top could be cropped as there is no detail in it. You would, of course, also lose the lovely tops of the grass on the right and the darker area top left. You might run the risk of the remaining part of the image being a bit too dark as well but you should be able to lighten it using your editing software or Picmonkey (the exposure sliders). As you say, cropping would make the geese appear more prominent. Have a play and see what you think suits the picture best!
June 26th, 2013  
I like the patterns in the water but yes, I think it would be better cropped tighter to eliminate most of the white area.
June 26th, 2013  
@sturnus Thanks Carol -your comments are helpful --I was trying to balance in my mind the to & against cropping --a play about is the answer to see if I can improve things --I should have done that before I posted but it was too late when I really saw it needed improving Again thanks
June 26th, 2013  
Lovely shot!
June 26th, 2013  
It is difficult to get the lighting all balanced on a shot like this. I always seem to get a lot of excess brightness when it is in the water
June 26th, 2013  
@digitalrn Thanks Rick -aia have been playing about a lot with this sjnce & I do not know if I shall post it tomorrow --must have another look !!
June 26th, 2013  
Pretty ! I actually like the grass at the top. - have fun experimenting
June 27th, 2013  
@smileclicksnap Thank you --shall have a go !
June 27th, 2013  
@gerry @killeen @lucypics @cdonohoue @sturnus @hillymay @sianb @digitalrn @smileclicksnap
Thank you all for your positive & helpful comments , photography ti me --no classes etc has always been a natural progress - my 1st camera bought me at the age of 6 or 7 tears old but from time to time one needs help- & constructive criticism from friends fits that bill -thank you all
June 27th, 2013  
I do quite like the different light in this shot & contrast with the green shrubs but the glare does affect the contrast a little i think! Would be happy with this myself though!
June 27th, 2013  
@happypat Ooh Pat you are too kind !! But I am glad you agree that take 2 is an improvement !
June 27th, 2013  
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