the freight train by quietpurplehaze

the freight train

I stood on the bridge at Eastleigh Railway Station hoping a purple Flybe would appear in the sky. I had to make do with this shot of a train.

A bit of artistic licence here to reproduce a verse from W H Auden's poem about the mail train but I just love the rhythm of the train running through the words:

"Letters of thanks, letters from banks,
Letters of joy from the girl and the boy,
Receipted bills and invitations
To inspect new stock or visit relations,
And applications for situations
And timid lovers' declarations
And gossip, gossip from all the nations,
News circumstantial, news financial,
Letters with holiday snaps to enlarge in,
Letters with faces scrawled in the margin,
Letters from uncles, cousins, and aunts,
Letters to Scotland from the South of France,
Letters of condolence to Highlands and Lowlands
Notes from overseas to Hebrides
Written on paper of every hue,
The pink, the violet, the white and the blue,
The chatty, the catty, the boring, adoring,
The cold and official and the heart's outpouring,
Clever, stupid, short and long,
The typed and the printed and the spelt all wrong."
Great poem and I could feel the train running along the rails, nice capture as well. Go on, admit it you were trainspotting.
November 20th, 2014  
@ladymagpie

I do believe one or two passers-by gave me a strange look!
November 20th, 2014  
Great capture and wonderful poem!! Love the beat of the train throughout!!
November 20th, 2014  
lovely shot!
November 20th, 2014  
Better on the tracks then on the roads
November 20th, 2014  
@pennystot

Too true - had not thought of it!
November 20th, 2014  
Ah well no purple today Hazel! An interesting train anyway!
November 20th, 2014  
Btw lovely to have the words of that fabulous railway poem written out properly Hazel...thanks.
November 20th, 2014  
A super capture and great to read the poem again after all these years.
November 20th, 2014  
Great poem and awesome train
November 20th, 2014  
Beautiful poem and capture of this fabulous train .
( Please, explain : you're just teasing now! I don`t quiet understand )
November 20th, 2014  
@pyrrhula

Ferry, I don't understand what you don't understand - please explain, and then I'll explain.
November 20th, 2014  
Wonderful capture and poem!
November 20th, 2014  
@quietpurplehaze The birth of a toadstool : C'mon Ferry, you're just teasing now! Well spotted and captured!
November 20th, 2014  
Lovely poem!!! Great shot of the train!!! Looks like a cold day!!! Nicely captured and POV!!!
November 21st, 2014  
Stunning picture.
November 21st, 2014  
a really nice shot! so much to take in
November 21st, 2014  
@pyrrhula

I meant that you are too skilled finding all these toadstool shots but I can hardly find any! Just teasing too!
November 21st, 2014  
Love the poem and the image Hazel There is such a lot to see.
November 21st, 2014  
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