Another Claudia Portrait by jyokota

Another Claudia Portrait

Claudia was the "bookseller" at the library event, the opening of the exhibition of Iranian children's book illustrations. Here, she is seated at the table full of books.

Another attempt at my get-pushed-62 challenge from David. I've taken into account the various constructive suggestions from my first portrait of Claudia posted a few days ago -- thank you, all!

Cropped B&W version, based on helpful feedback:
http://365project.org/jyokota/omake/2013-09-26
@dtigani-- I've taken more portraits in this past week than I have in my entire project thus far!
September 29th, 2013  
Lovely
September 29th, 2013  
First, Claudia is a very nice subject because she has a beautiful smile and a wonderful personality! I love this shot of her--the background, I'm "meh" about, so I'd probably crop out the left and right to her hair, or just the right. Does that make sense? What a lovely friend! I loved her other portrait. It was spot on! Can you do my portrait next? :)
September 29th, 2013  
Oh, and I'm officially in on the next "get-pushed." Why am I so nervous? :)
September 29th, 2013  
Claudia has a lovely smile and her whole face smiles too. I agree about the background, maybe the photo could be cropped or background blurred. Also, I wonder what this would be like in B&W as your other portrait shot in B&W was quite lovely.
September 29th, 2013  
love the charming portrait :)
September 29th, 2013  
You are doing a good job...it is a difficult thing I find.
September 29th, 2013  
@jyokota A lovely portrait. Well done.
September 30th, 2013  
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