deliberately discordant by koalagardens

deliberately discordant

for the 30 day challenge I'm doing - did I create discord, I felt I did it with several elements of the composition
My eye keeps taking me to the table. The position of the vase on the table in front is freaking me out. The sunlight is pretty but it puts the flowers in the dark. Yes I would say you have discord :)
August 20th, 2021  
@sugarmuser yep the leading line takes you away from the subject, and also I fiddled to get the table angle feeling a bit off too. glad that subject is done, it's unnerving 😂
August 20th, 2021  
I wish I could remove the vase from the scene and just sit at the table ;-)
August 20th, 2021  
Yep....think you have succeeded on all the elements of that one.....
August 20th, 2021  
I am all the way with @sugarmuser
August 20th, 2021  
@ludwigsdiana it's right beside my front door and I was sitting on the chair that goes with this table. one day we have a dream and when that is reached you will sit right there with that same table 🤗
August 20th, 2021  
Looks like it works!
August 20th, 2021  
Your leading line of the walk takes your eyes away from the subject. I think you achieved your goal.
August 20th, 2021  
What an interesting challenge - well done with this subject.
August 20th, 2021  
Nicely done
August 20th, 2021  
You have definitely created discord. I want to reach out and straighten things but that would probably totally upset the balance
August 20th, 2021  
Great capture
August 20th, 2021  
A lovely composition
August 20th, 2021  
sweet composition
August 20th, 2021  
Beautiful composition and lovely light in background.
August 20th, 2021  
I think you did - the eye doesn't know whether to look into the enticing distance or at the big vase of flowers right in front of it. :)
August 21st, 2021  
Interesting composition with the deliberate discord.
August 21st, 2021  
I think you achieved discord because the sun in the distance attracts the eye away from the plant in the front. Also a vased plant on the corner of the table seems a little out of place, but maybe that’s just me.
August 21st, 2021  
Cool capture.
August 21st, 2021  
@shutterbug49 no you picked the things I deliberately did that to me were really creating discord, I completely agree!
@robz yep that is what I felt worked as discord, my eye wants to follow the leading line and the light, but the rather finished bunch of flowers are obviously the subject

interestingly no one felt that the flowers that are quite past their prime were part of the discord. I knew that was my subject for the day and I picked the vase up to take outside and send the flowers to mulch heaven, and then thought hang on these are rather discordant and this is where it all ended up 😊
August 21st, 2021  
Lovely flowers...fav
August 21st, 2021  
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