Not satisfied with just one cookie... by mcsiegle

Not satisfied with just one cookie...

I myself wasn't satisfied...with the diptych I posted yesterday here:
https://365project.org/mcsiegle/alternates/2023-08-23
So I've done a second version of the same thing. I'm still not completely happy with it, but I think this one is better. I prefer this framing. The Allosaurus still looks pasted on top rather than a natural part of the picture. But turning him around gives us his better side. We see his one good arm and I think his expression is less fierce on this this side.
@kali66 dino redux.
August 25th, 2023  
Lovely! If you use a bit of "burn" underneath to give Al the allossurus a shadow he'd look less pasted on ( get me giving out tips!!)
August 25th, 2023  
Cute
August 25th, 2023  
Another fun diptych.
August 25th, 2023  
I like them both equally, but I agree with you. This one is better with his entire arm.
August 25th, 2023  
Such fun!
August 27th, 2023  
@Dawn @grammyn @joysabin Thanks so much for taking the time to look at this re-do and comment. @30pics4jackiesdiamond Thanks! I may give that a try if I get the time.
August 27th, 2023  
I prefer this view as well. Also, the flow from left to right is more natural with the empty plate on the right.
August 29th, 2023  
What tool are you compositing the allosaurus with? The reason it looks pasted is because it needs a shadow like the other dinosaurs have. Hope you don’t mind my saying. I think you were right to switch the order from not eaten to eaten, left to right.
September 9th, 2023  
Thanks for the observation @shutterbug49
I was using Ribbet. I’ll take your suggestion and Jackie’s @30pics4jackiesdiamond into consideration for future attempts.
September 10th, 2023  
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