Looking Down re-edit

I've re-edited the shot I had already posted for this date...cropped out the bottom of the frame. I think this makes a stronger design but would like your feedback if you'd like to give it...thanks

The link to the original is below:
https://365project.org/granagringa/365/2017-03-29
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[Batya]

love the lines and colors

[Claes]

This one is much more effective. I think due to the reduced number of shapes and sizes. I'll give it a fav!

[Granagringa]

@shilohmom Thank you so much , Batya.

[Granagringa]

@runner365 Thanks for taking the time to look at both and compare...sometimes trying to get the shot up the same day, I realize only later a different edit would be more effective. And i am thrilled that you "faved" it. Thanks, Claes.