@dkbarnett I think this is a great improvement on my first attempt. Probably because I used my X-T5 instead of the iPhone. I'd appreciate your comments on both as I want to try to improve my technique. Cheers.
My challenge was actually low key portrait photography Andrew, and although this is a lovely portrait this is more high key, although as high key there probably should be more lightness to the image. Maybe google some low key portrait images - there should be a lot of dark with some dramatic lighting. Thanks Delwyn