The Hidden Stairs (continued) by digitalrn

The Hidden Stairs (continued)

...and that's when I saw it. A distinct figure, just barely in the light. I leaned in closer to get a better viewing angle. In that instant, a pair of cold, piercing eyes stared back at me. My mind, immediately freaking out, I dropped the flashlight. Honey! Come here! You've got to see this! I am the type of person that enjoys a good ghost story, and I would be the first in line to see the latest horror movie, but this is in my freaking house! This is freaking real! My Wife came stumbling into the storage room. "What in the world are you doing in here?" Honey, you've got to see this. I told you I was hearing voices. "My God! It's one o'clock in the morning!" Honey, come here. See this crack in the wall boards? I saw a dim light coming through, and when I looked through the crack I saw a set of stairs, and then I saw a figure, and then these eyes, they stared right out at me. It really freaked me out! Grab the flashlight. Take a look for yourself. "You are crazy!" My Wife grabbed the light and peered through the crack in the wall boards. "What am I supposed to see?" Don't you see the stairs? "Honey, all I see is a white plaster wall. I told you you were crazy." Give me the light, I snapped. I leaned against the wall and peered through the crack. A white plaster wall. What in God's name is going on here. I know what I saw! I'm telling you, I know what I saw! My Wife mumbled somthing under her breath and walked out, returning to bed. I stood there in total confusion. What in the world did I see a few minutes ago? I leaned against the wall for one more look. I shined the light through the crack. The white plaster wall was still there, but now, written in large letters were the words "YOU HEARD OUR CRIES AND YOU ALONE MUST HELP US" Again, that same cold puff of air. What in the world was happening? I stepped back, confused, slowly lowering myself to kneel on the floor. What is going on?
Wow Rick this story gets creepier.
October 28th, 2010  
Hmmmmmmm!!!!
October 28th, 2010  
You are so talented, Rick. You could write on your days off. =) Spppooooookkkkkyyyyyyyyyy
October 28th, 2010  
Interesting story! Great shot
October 28th, 2010  
You are pulling me into the story....
October 28th, 2010  
You are a great story teller!!!
October 28th, 2010  
This is building up to a very scary story....I like where you are going with this with the pictures and story...Great idea!!!
October 28th, 2010  
ooooo ... i'm lovin' this. thank you!!!
October 28th, 2010  
This is another great shot for the theme! But whoever is up there isn't getting my help- I'm not stepping a foot on that staircase!!!
October 28th, 2010  
Oooh, I hope there's more! You are kicking some major butt on this theme!
October 28th, 2010  
coolness rick... could be an SNEEK PEEK Ad for a brand new horror film..... Well done, my friend.... and the story... whoooooa......
October 28th, 2010  
LOVE! This is so wonderful! CREATIVE! hahahahaha! I needed this laugh! :)
October 28th, 2010  
Okay, I'm hooked...!
October 28th, 2010  
RUN, NOW, and save yourself; but I bet you look thru those cracks in the wall again.........................scary stuff.
October 28th, 2010  
Help them! So hooked on this now, I can't wait for the next installment!
October 28th, 2010  
I'll tune in tomorrow for the continuing story. I love it! There are so many talented people here.
October 28th, 2010  
Great story, and great shots..
October 28th, 2010  
Sue
OoOooOOOhh!! this is good! way to keep an audience in suspense!
October 28th, 2010  
Really? Is it true? I guess yes because you caught the words.
October 28th, 2010  
Fun Rick. Nice job with story and photo.
October 28th, 2010  
Written in blood?!!! Run away!
October 28th, 2010  
Oh i cant wait till tomorrow! Great idea, and wonderfully written story :)
October 28th, 2010  
Ahhh, very nice...keep it coming (:
October 28th, 2010  
Oh my god, LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
October 28th, 2010  
That is really cool. I used to ghost hunt many yrs ago, did it for 10 yrs and seen a lot of cool happenings, stuff that would blow anyones mind,word of caution be very careful with this, you have no idea on what you might be dealing with. I gave it up for a reason. still very cool though sure miss the good old days.
October 28th, 2010  
Oooooh, I can't wait for the next. This is getting creepier!
Brilliant creativity!
October 28th, 2010  
The story sounds so real there really are things that go bump in the night
October 28th, 2010  
Way to get in the spirit!!
October 28th, 2010  
This is a whole new side of you, Rick!
October 29th, 2010  
thats creepy rick lol
im alll alone in my house!
October 29th, 2010  
I love it! I'm hooked. keep going.
October 29th, 2010  
Rick this is so fun!! Great spooky story! We want more!
October 29th, 2010  
Great story Rick, I'm off to read the next installment LOL
October 29th, 2010  
...sorry I'm laughing..I love it Rick..really love it!!!
October 30th, 2010  
I'm intrigued!
October 30th, 2010  
This is fabulous so far! You've definitely captured my attention! This is my kind of story.
November 2nd, 2010  
Oh, it continues...............glad I didn't have to wait a whole day to read the next part.
November 3rd, 2010  
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