The Hidden Stairs (continued) by digitalrn

The Hidden Stairs (continued)

We finally touched, and the instant our hands met, I was transported to another time, but still in a stairwell. The stairwell was filled with a thick, putrid smoke. I tried to move up a few more steps, but then ran into a wall. The stairs went no further. It was a plaster wall that ran to the ceiling. A dead end. All of a sudden I heard frantic screaming. My sinuses burned, and the smoke was irritating my throat. I began coughing, actually choking on the polluted thick grey air. I heard the screaming again, and pounding, and then the sound of a younger person yelling, "Momma! Momma! Please Momma, I can't open the door. Momma!" I held up the lantern and descended a few steps. The smoke was thick, and it was extremely warm making it very difficult to breathe. I saw a figure, a young girl, maybe around 12 years old. She was at the bottom of the stairs, frantically pounding on the door, screaming for help. I heard another voice in the distance, "Honey, I am trying! I'm trying to get to you!" I rushed down the remaining stairs, and just like that she was gone. I grabbed the door knob, but it wouldn't turn. I threw myself into the door, but it didn't budge. Where was the opening I came through? There was no door here. Where was the opening? I held up the lantern, turned to look up the stairs, and there she was. The smoke was gone, the air had cleared, but there in the midst of the stairwell, the face, the face of a young girl. She had long blonde hair, blue eyes, and they were looking right at me. Who are you, I asked. She responded, "You heard our cry for help. You are the first living soul that heard our cry for help. You alone can help us." I immediately asked her what she meant. I don't understand, I said. "There was a terrible fire. I became trapped in here, and I died here in this stairway 65 years ago. I heard Momma screaming. She tried desperately to get to me, but could not. The door was blocked and she could not open it. My spirit has been trapped here in time since then. I had argued with Momma because she would not allow me to go to a friends house. I went up into the attic to hide for several hours. That is when the fire broke out. I became trapped, and because we had argued, Momma has been blaming herself since then for my death. She believes that if we would not have had the argument, I would still be alive. I know what she has been thinking for the past 65 years. You see, Momma is still alive...
Ok, I've got goosebumps! Good story! OH, and good picture too!
October 29th, 2010  
really scary rick! its like its very true!
October 29th, 2010  
I haven't seen a good scary movie in some time and this is good. As I read this to my husband he says, "I hope I can sleep tonight!"
October 30th, 2010  
Beautiful photo and nice job--your story is coming along...
October 30th, 2010  
fun pic and on the edge of my seat....
October 30th, 2010  
So cool! Fave =)
October 30th, 2010  
Good Job Rick!!!
October 30th, 2010  
NIcely done, super!
October 30th, 2010  
Awesome, Rick. Scaring me. Stop it. lol
October 30th, 2010  
totally spooky......... gives me the chills, rick....
October 30th, 2010  
Great story, Rick.....I hope her spirit gets free! Can't wait for the rest!
October 30th, 2010  
really scary story and photo interpretation!
October 30th, 2010  
Uh, yeah, spooky... FOR SURE! *shivers*
October 30th, 2010  
Rick I'm loving every minute of the story. Continue please. Great shot.
October 30th, 2010  
Very fun story and great shot
October 30th, 2010  
what a great shot
October 30th, 2010  
Cool!
October 30th, 2010  
Love your ghost shot...and I was wrong in thinking I knew what would happen next...
October 30th, 2010  
Poor baby, needs to tell her mama she is sorry. great shot, and edit..
October 30th, 2010  
Good story. How do you think up these things? It is so sad! Poor momma!
October 30th, 2010  
Yikes!!!
October 30th, 2010  
Man your good.
October 30th, 2010  
Wow!!! Great photo rick... :)
October 30th, 2010  
You could be another Stephen King, Rick. Nice shot for the theme.
October 30th, 2010  
Great job and perfect photo.
October 30th, 2010  
Ghostly. Love the treatment.
October 30th, 2010  
You write so fantastically and to have photos to go with it! Wow. Just wow!
October 30th, 2010  
Awesome story,loving it rick,great pic!
October 30th, 2010  
Excellent photo!!
October 30th, 2010  
I like your picture it illustrates your VERY creepy story so well
October 30th, 2010  
Such talent you possess.
October 30th, 2010  
ohhhh very good, now I can't wait til tomorrows shot.
October 30th, 2010  
What a great story Rick.
October 30th, 2010  
freakyyyyy!! :/
October 30th, 2010  
Very ghostly. Nicely done!
October 30th, 2010  
Wonderfully spooky photo, and I like the twist in the story!
October 30th, 2010  
Oh Man you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the end of your tale.. Great picture & story Rick..
October 30th, 2010  
Great stuff!
October 30th, 2010  
Great spooky shot x
October 30th, 2010  
wow this is really great Rick- very realistic! you are doing such a fantastic job with this series :) hats off to you!
October 31st, 2010  
You've got a real page-turner going here!
October 31st, 2010  
very cool shot
October 31st, 2010  
..... oh, dear .....

cool shot.
October 31st, 2010  
love the ghostly effect .....
October 31st, 2010  
Nice shot.
October 31st, 2010  
Great shot, eerie. loving the story.
October 31st, 2010  
Love the ghost shot and the story!!
October 31st, 2010  
Sue
I'm just loving this!!
October 31st, 2010  
the story continues to get better with every photo! This photo is great!
October 31st, 2010  
Cool!
October 31st, 2010  
Cool shot....and I'm turning the page!
November 1st, 2010  
Again, I can't wait for the next picture! Really awesome! How sad that she has been trapped all those years and her mom has been blaming herself.
November 2nd, 2010  
Great pic, Rick!
November 2nd, 2010  
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