a shot in the dead of the night by summerfield

a shot in the dead of the night

they say nobody lived here anymore. the inhabitants left in a haste when one night, in the dead of winter, a shot was heard, a scream tore through the stillness. when the police came the next morning the house had been abandoned, there was blood but no body was ever found. no one was ever reported missing. the family who occupied it was never heard from.

sometimes, people who nosed around would hear voices coming from inside, or a horrible moaning as if coming from under the earth; ghostly figures had been seen through the broken windows.

i walked around once, took pictures of the dilapidated back balcony, the banisters breaking down at the touch merely by the wind. i thought i heard some movement, but it could be the squirrels or some sort of small animals, panicking at the sight of humans. i saw a stuffed cabbage patch doll, lying down a broken step, half buried in mud and grass, its lips still in a smile despite its condition. i leaned down and zoomed in on its dirty face. and that's when i heard the cocking of a rifle, the clicking of the trigger, and the exploding sound before i saw that bullet hit my face.

pretty sinister imagination, huh?
That is quite the story Vikki. It suits this old building perfectly
August 13th, 2013  
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Cool story, fabulous old house.
August 13th, 2013  
great old house. I bet it is haunted.
August 13th, 2013  
you'd be a great ghost story teller!
August 13th, 2013  
Just love the narration! It is so sad to see such a beautiful house just being left to decay!
August 13th, 2013  
Love the front!! Great shot!
August 13th, 2013  
Great capture and awesome narration :)
August 13th, 2013  
Looks like it was once a beautiful house. Great story, yes very sinister imagination!!
August 13th, 2013  
wow this place is awesome
August 13th, 2013  
sad to see old houses fall apart like this, great shot, great story
August 13th, 2013  
Great shot, great house.. and great story
August 13th, 2013  
Was gripped at every word! Shame it is abandoned it is rather pretty
August 13th, 2013  
Spooky!
August 13th, 2013  
Awww, I was hoping that you heard the sound but saw no one and ran for your life. Sad looking house does have the right look for a ghost story. I wonder how quickly that could turn around if someone gave it the TLC is deserves. Oh well, till then it's fuel for the imagination. Nice shot.
August 14th, 2013  
I'd say your imagination is extraordinary. Great capture and wonderful story very intriguing.
August 14th, 2013  
what a neat old house........so sad it wasn't cared for........and watch out for those shot guns, girl!!!! ;)
August 14th, 2013  
sounds spooky, love the house though
August 19th, 2013  
This is fantastic Vicki. Totally love it. Want to go back and go inside? I'm game if you are :)
August 20th, 2013  
@k1w1 - i am! thank you!
August 20th, 2013  
@summerfield we'll have to set a date
August 20th, 2013  
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